[FONT=Impact][COLOR=Red][SIZE=3]Hey ya'll, representin down south. Just a home girl w/ a buncha stuff on her mind, thought it'd be a good outlet, get time holla @ mah boy christianite, he's gonna b something. Newayz, you know the drill. Needin some feedback on what's goin on. lata. [/SIZE][/COLOR][/FONT]

This one's entitled, Can't Handle the Heat

If you can’t handle the heat, stay outta the sun, cuz I’m fixing to tell you how it all gonna be done.
Your gonna sit your pretty self, down in the chair, read these words, and live in fear
. Cuz a picture is worth a thousand words, what’s worth more your mug or your slurs?
Tell me hater, tell me player, tell me pimp, tell me there. What do you know about anything?
You got anything to show?
No you got nothing but some dope rhymes, like..whoa..
Nothing to show, for the life you’ve lead, maybe some sweet rims and some really nice threads.
Tell me now, have you taken the time, to sit down, to learn and to listen.
Do you know where you goin when your life you livin is trippin?
Do you know where u going when you die, or even living?
You need Jesus man, the dude who did it all, the dude who put out his neck for you and died for you on a cross.
You need to sit down, take this all in, cuz when you get done you have to answer for what you did. You have to make a decision, choose or reject, whichever you choose will decide where you go next.

hi ummm work on ya struct......n vocab otherwise kool...

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Free Time...

I Live the Lifestyle You Want to Live

Secret Society/Cut Throat

welcome to RV...thats wassup...another femcee

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yeah welcome gurl (femcee also ) I like all these kats comin in with a positive message, too much hatin in here! but yeah jus work on ur structure and nah vocab aint everything, as long as it gets the message across that u wana potray, keep it simple! holla if u need anything!

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!