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Old 06-29-05, 01:26 AM   #1
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check, i ride thru Bronx wit tha biggest chips, got tha biggest whips//
wit sumthin lightskin in tha passenger that got tha biggest tits//
im a hot tempered nigga, quick 2 pull out tha trigga//
niggaz talkin like they bigga like they speakin tha truth//
thats why im sendin u a message 2 tell u how it go in tha booth//
and dont look around homeboy cause im speakin 2 u//
u want 2 go at it wit me, i send u back 2 ur birth//
and this time make sure that u born in a church//
so as soon as u r i can put u back in tha dirt//
and send u back 2 wat u worth, u aint worth my time//
ur rhymes is wack dog u jus makin a noise//
u killin my eardrums and u not even makin a voice//
i see water when u spit, not cause it flow, its moist//
talkin that stupid shit u sound like Nas on some roids//
and i can get religious too check how Takeover do//
when i pull out 2 glocks and bless hail mary's on u//
talkin bout u alwayz was broke, its cause u neva sold soap//
u neva was dope, u talk like u hope and really is trash//
i come in tha church wit 2 glocks shoot up tha Mass//
ur family reunion, ancestors, shoot up ur past//
im tha hottest nigga in tha game yall shud notice my name//
cause it brings joy 2 all those who cherish it well//
see tha life thru my eyes, now u notice its hell//
spend a day in my shoes then i'll give u respect//
till then u get none its jus bullshit u rep//
u can stay in ur hoopty while im flyin in jets//
wit tha dymest ma's got tha slanted eyes and tha thickest thighs//
going down 2 tha islands and we rentin out tha sickest rides//
im str8, as long as i got the grip on my waist//
money in my pocket, i got a smile on my face//
i was known jus 2 thug out right in my dugout//
Boogie down where i be, shit be all bugged out//
used 2 have tha slugs out in case they bugged out//
made my money off dice shootin and fiends that used to drug out//
i was yung real dumb robbin niggaz 4 fun//
now i rob 4 money, cars, jewels and even a gun//
and as long as im alive my family gonna be str8//
i got u my niggaz, hold it down, whether robbin or weight//
i blaze by tha cops, i was raised by tha block//
wasn't raised by my pop, but still a chip off tha block//
i make money everyday while all u do is pray//
tha only way 2 stay rich is 2 have it in gray//
i cruise by, laid back, watch u scroungin 4 a chip//
body in tha backseat, look like im loungin in tha whip//
u call urself God's property, im a send u 2 meet him//
u talkin like we in church, im not sayin i dont need him//
lord forgive me 4 my sins, but niggaz be outta line//
talkin like they tha only ones that dont be outta line//
im Bronx's own, New York's most wanted//
Hugh Hef of tha game, im a playboy and all tha bitches in on it//
u thinkin u nice cause u prophesizing in text//
cant wait 2 see tha bullshit that u come up wit next// FUCKIN LAME ASS NIGGA


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Old 06-29-05, 02:30 AM   #2
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Old 06-29-05, 09:07 AM   #3
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Old 06-29-05, 07:07 PM   #4
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NIGGAZ DONT GIVE BACK NO KIND OF FEED UPPIN 4 FEED MAN!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-29-05, 07:12 PM   #5
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yo homie this shyt was koo just the "//" was bugging feel me!but the structurre was kind of off but thats koo the rhymin couple of linez was off!thr rhyming scheme was alright,long az fck the multiz just werent there,and the vocab want there either but thi wa an alright piece!
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