I need elavated.

yeah man..i need some help with setting up punches..cause someone told me my punches were good but i couldve set it up better.....

Aight Sab....Give Me That Battle Verse and I'll Pick It Apart and See What I Can Do.

Also...Dopium You Have To Be More Percise On What You Need Elevated With.

~R~

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=195843

thats the link..Mimesis said i need to use the first line to set up the punch in almost every bar.....

Aight, I See What Mimesis Is Talking About (Even Though Mim Ain't Good At Text)

Um..You Have The Style Where You Like To Get As Many Disses In As Possible and You Diss Him Diffrently In Everyline. Some Emcees Like That, Some Don't.

If You Want To Do It The Other Way This Is How You Could've Done It....Just Showing You, So Don't Expect Dopeness Haha..

Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name*
Cause All You Speak Is B.S. Into Your Name...
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame
Cause This Fag Woudln't Get Show-Cased If He Was In
The Hall of Fame
Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more**
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard
You Did Good Here
Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes***
Seriously..This Cat Couldn't Throw Flames If His Name Was Hadies..
He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies
This Line Was WAck..Fuck That

Just A LiL Example..Hopefully You See What I Was Trying To Get At.

~R~