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08-17-05, 02:49 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 17th @ 2:49 p.m.
check it out it'z goin down fa sho Heat spreadz out from within tha point of contact, no contractz wit Heaven or Hell just strugglin 4 dear life when i bust back, left unstrapped, my enemiez experience tha wrath from my gat, if u aint finna die niggah u best lay back, now, organz malfuncture, blood spew out of intravenous sectionz, six hollowz iz where tha bulletz left they puncture, now i feel tha weight lift off my legz as my body collapses towardz tha concrete, my enemiez soul departed from lungz ruptured, eyez rolled back, nah fucc that, fight tha overwhelming fog of death, as it creepz across my soul'z depth, no fuccin light at tha end of no tunnel just blurred visions of my surroundingz before my spirit from tha carcass left The harsh reality i'm faced in multiplies the complicalities im placed in sometimes i feel caged in the fantasy i'm staged in, with time wastin ebbing away my vacant casing, inequality springs from the foundations children taught the basics of discrimination, subtle shows through a media nation through wide open eyes i look at the souls this hateful world's took tied down until the day their names are read from the eternal book never to look, down to a world lived in by their families and friends never again to feel the pleasue and pain that their lives sustain the mainframe of life; hard work and strife, good deeds commited outta sight away from the limelight, where the devil designs fright for thoose who shine bright governments disregarding rights, lawless fights, full of police brutality distention doubling the prevent of prevention, with less criminal detention
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-18-05, 10:03 AM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 18th @ 9:30 a.m.
Payn'z Intro [Hook 2x] Who Am I? Dat Nigga Payn & Y Am I Here 2 Start Up Thunderstorms & Creat Lyrical Reigns ...I'm alwayz asked alot of questions... ...wut bout me is it, i think is great & do i feel at times i'm 2nd guessin...// ...2 avoid all tha B.S. i tell dem evathang i do no matta wut it is great... ...no 2nd guessin here, my style is neva sloppy like an upside down cake...// ...otha questions r how do u feel ya tha youngest real & 2 b so ill... ...it'z all hood tho i like it but i feel dat it'z betta when i start 2 kill...// ...i'm known all ova the undagrounds wit no money~bills... ...i got tha soul of a hustla so i guess i know how SunNy~feels...// ...tell ya tha Truth i'm 22 now & got tha vocab & dummy~skillz... ...my flow is designed 2 leave ya more hyped den takin X~Pills...// ...it leaves ya shook & shakin from all tha metas & wordplay i'm displayin... ...most can't compete, afta my verbal rush u'll b like Roy Jones flat out layin...// ...it'z time 4 me, 2 come in shut down shit & start makin thangz myne... ...like Onyx, O.P.M. cuz Time Is Money i gotta stay down & continue grindin...//
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me Last edited by Payn : 08-18-05 at 10:06 AM. |
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08-20-05, 03:56 PM
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#33
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 20th, 2005
Lyrical Murdah
...travelin at top speed while I grip my machete... ...cause the dead weight on RV is really gettin too heavy//... ...lets raise the heat level to surpass the Serengeti... T.T survives, the rest die out, bloody and sweaty//... ...while ya pen shakes and hesitates, my AK levitates... ...at a downward 60 degree angle, let me demonstrate//... ...gimme a good excuse to tell Strobe why I assassinate... ...and fa you to get ya mind right and TRY to elevate//... ...crap rappers, yall enough to drive a nigga insane... ...pull the trigga have ya remains lookin inhumane//... ...tie ya to the tracks, run you ova wit the "Soul Train"//... ...collect "Spirits" of weak mc's, send em back to hell from whence them came... ...please understand that this is far more than a game//... ...ship you to the coroner, first class, clothes blood stained... ...have Monie Love talkin bout "It's Really A Shame"//... ...this the "PAYN" reppin the "EastCoast", nigga, learn the name...
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-21-05, 05:47 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F38C 26F8
i like your diary. i was goin thru some of em and noticed some funny shit: ain't none of these the same. u got verses on yours, i got str8 chaos on mine, and UNF has an actual diary on his. makes me feel like i'm doin somethin wrong. anyway, your verses on here are sick. lyricism iz the key. try stretchin your vocabulary; usin words and flow styles u don't normally use. nice diary playa.
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08-25-05, 11:23 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 25th @ 11:10 p.m.
Misguided Soul ...Eva since a nigga was born & raised up i felt very deprived...
...Didn't get a thang i really wanted & been told lies while b'in looked in tha eyez... ...I hate not having ne role models in my life 2 really guide me in tha right direction... ...As i journey into manhood, now i decide where 2 head as i pause at da intersection... ...My life has been a hard test, & i neva wanted 2 b headed down tha wrong path... ...But i can't escape tha fact, how i'ma live if i don't stack up my math... ...Like Usher, I got it bad..Growing up in a foster home wit no mom or dad... ...Watchin otha kidz hug dey parents, & go home jus makes me real mad... ...On Christmas families spend time 2getha, & open up all dey gifts... ...While i mope around, lookin out tha window drinkin & smokin a spliff... ...22 years diz world'z givin me tha Shoulder & in my mind it'z Cold... ...Here's a short intro of y i feel dat i'm a Misguided Soul... [*note 2 start up on anotha joint asap*]
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me Last edited by Payn : 08-27-05 at 07:16 PM. |
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08-27-05, 11:30 AM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 27th @ 11:15 a.m.
..ClUbBiN FrEeStYlE.. [/CENTER][B]..i step up in tha place..back, back give me my space.. ..jus respect my G, don't test or catch a bow in ya face.. ..like Cas, I'm Chyllin In My B-Boy Stance..didn't come here 2 dance.. ..basically 2 smoke, drink..make den brake az many hoes here 4 tha takin.. ..more den a playa, cuz of tha mind rapin..heart breakin..settin tha tone regulatin..
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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08-30-05, 09:15 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is August 30th @ 8:45 p.m.
Afta Effect Of Bullying ..diz kid Lou was tha smallest in his class..was only 4'0 in grade 5..
..got punked by an olda Kenny..4 his lunch money, self-confidence & diginty.. ..started in Lorton in kindergarten..up til 9th grade in Eastside Mt. Partian.. ..is when he got fed up..he went home & grab a gun out his folks bedroom.. ..next day vowed 2 make him bleed..& he'll get smoked like a bag of shrooms.. ..next day hit & lil Lou got hyped..thinkin aftawards it'll turn da day 2 night.. ..he heads 2 school..go lookin 4 dat fool..den ask his boy have u seen Ken.. ..yeah he went dat way..u wanna get found him so he can stick u again.. ..it ain't happening 2day..afta years of torture he's gonna have 2 pay.. ..at da end of tha hall he saw him..so Lou played like he was leaving.. ..Kenny said get ova here..& told Lou hand ova all of his money 4 lunch.. ..Lou whipped out tha pistol..blasted Kenny & which made his body bunch.. ..like hard punches it put him down..& put his azz down on tha ground.. ..Lou shot til tha clip was on e..& diz is tha end of tha bully named Kenny.. all of diz is fictional but really does happen so jus take precaution
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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09-01-05, 12:26 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
2day is Sept 1st, 2005 @ 12:10 p.m. ... got my welfare check ..lol word
Movement ...when i wake up in tha morning..afta a lil stretching, & yawning... ...get out da bed..shake my legs a bit..make sure their awake so i fall & trip... ...go 2 tha bathroom..brush my teeth..wash my face, 2 erase last night'z sleep... ...turn on tha water 2 wash up..afta goggling my scope dat'z in my cup... ...get cleaned up so i can feel fresh..get sum clothes on so i can look def... ...grab da tips, & load up my gat..b4 i leave, also grab my weed & powder sacks... ...i'm off 2 tha block 2 clock sum dough..make sure all my biz is kept a secret u know...
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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09-05-05, 09:44 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
Thinkin Bacc ..As i sit bacc & reminisce...my life's been a trip.. ..from jump...starting off riding my big wheel...2 likin girlz...den started 2 flip.. ..hittin tha blocc...sellin dem roccs...totin 2 gloccs...roll out when i c cops.. ..watch tha moonlight as i toast...wit chiccz...put my all into wuteva i got.. ..in all types of gunfights...hang wit nig'z like oozie clip...G...J...& half pint.. ..keep my clothes & shoe game tight...brodes can get me right...eva nite.. *..will continue diz shit off 2morrow fa sho..*
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me Last edited by Payn : 09-10-05 at 11:33 AM. |
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09-10-05, 11:40 AM
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IP: 8A05 210E
..paintin picturaz & images of da good dayz have been..
..even tho it'z a life of sin..u gotta play ur hand & try ur best 2 get dat win.. ..i can't dwell in tha past..well i'm out gettin cash..jaccaz wanna get me bad.. ..try sticcin me up & i'm quicc 2 blaze dey azz..my cup's runneth ova 2 my last.. ..fez wanna harass..cuz dey found a pound of grass..while i'm hidin my stash.. ..mental trip, but i hold on..my game & mind is so strong..jus tha same ol song..
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Choose words carefully when you address me
You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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09-12-05, 09:24 AM
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IP: 8A05 210E
..Feel Dat Release..
...Jus 2 break tha chains..& have tha whole world callin my name... ...get tha opporunity 2 put my foot 2 tha pedal..start makin sum real G'z... ...get behind tha mic..recite dat shit i live as i write..look 4 tha right beat... ...hit tha right keys..flow ova tha tracc wit ease..doin it 4 tha luv dat it brings... ...whether tha tempo's high or low..i'll decided whether i'll spit it fast or slo... ...oppporunities will come knoccin..plenty of bad bitches will pled 4 tha fuccin... ...meet people by tha millions..signin autographs 4 dem, as well 4 small children... ...soon as i get my break i'm takin it..spit sum wicced shit, get signed 2 a label quicc...
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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10-06-05, 12:42 PM
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IP: 8A05 210E
..2day is Oct 6th, 2005.. ...Random Thoughtz... ..y do i think of Suicide evatime i look at my life.. ..may b cuz it'z full of grief, Hell, & thangz neva seem 2 go right.. ..i get so tired of doin, & alwayz gettin tha treated like a Criminal.. ..think i'm losin my mind, cuz of tha mistreatment got me goin Clinical.. ..tha many Homicides i've committed in my past, come bacc & haunt me.. ..it'z like i hear dez "Voices" all day & night steadily jus tauntin me.. ..sayin "We're Gonna Get U Bacc 4 Wut U've Have Done".. ..i can't regret my mishaps cuz we both had fully loaded guns.. ..it'z obvious, i reacted quicca 2 tha situation & ended up b'in tha last 1..
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You ain't gotta like me, but you're gonna respect me (Or else) or else you get wet like a jigsknee Take ten of these and live, that'll impress me |
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