uppin..........

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I'mma be mad at you if you didn't ride that "Roots" beat right


"What They Do, What They Do"

that's a classic

Beat: "What They Do" The Roots from the illadelph halflife album




oh you aint do the beat no justice

you had no emotions and your timing was off

listen for the snare next time
that snare ?uestlove is dropping on that beat should be your focal point with a beat like this

lyrics cool but it was like you was bored when you was spitting them



keep elevating






-Storm

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lmao ok first off para wasnt you banned? bitch...anyways track was ass to be honest flow needs alotta work same with emotion i couldnt understand you stop mumblin up your quality also keep droppin...(or not)..=1=......

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O.wning Y.ou D.aily

Y.ou Know My Style 20 Niggas Wit 40 Cals

word^^^^^^lmao.

your a ass, you always gotta be hatin, you think your all good comin from new york, fuck off, i left all that nice feedback on yours and you come and be a ass in mine, i aint gonna get banned again unless someone does somin to set me up, and if that happens that just proves how much of cowards people are, and you dont get it, sure i might not be good for a first single, but you know what, your no better so stop actin hard on the net.

poser.

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leavin feed while listen-

long intro for real......flow is garbage to be honest, lyrics is iight but ya voice sounded like a robot, emotion sucks. Some part made sense at the same time wack like the terrisom and realism I was like wtf.....quality was ehh.......keep tryin you'll get better wen the time passes on by..........

i dont like that, sayin i sound like a robot, i sound nothin like a robot man, specially comin from someone who is no better then me and you sayin that, i have better quality then you and a better voice and you sayin that, if you knew how to write topicals you'd understand my lyrics better.

learn buddie, you elevate

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see you cant take critism you did sound like a robot, you're flow was kinda fucked up quality could be better so can mine of course cuz it wasnt made ina studio, and I am better than you....this aint topical its audio and you suppose to go wit the beat which you did but it was like ur eh ur robotish type shit.....like I said elevate...

ooh yea RTF-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204411

i will faster then you will, dont worry bout that man

and its not the fact that i cant take critism its the fact that you talkin wit all the "your flow is wack and the emotion is crap" that aint nice man, if you wanna keep a nice calm e friend then i suggest you leave feed proper and show empathy when you leavin critism.

thats all i mean, i know im not good, but i know i'll elevate faster then you.

sry but thats just how it is, cuz i'll be recordin almost every weak maybe like 3 times a weak or more.

i got all that time now that i told my mom what i do on the computer, she aint care i told her i'll be makin money off of it in the summer so she lettin me

well i havent told her yet but i will.

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good for you lol and you dont need to record everyday to elevate...I freestyle any minute I can so yea w/e just leave honest feed like I did for you....

yea thats very true, my freestyles is rare now man.

trust me next audio track i record will be really dope, but the fact that i have that recordin time is good though ya know, it will be fun to sit in my room n spit and listen to it.

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