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Old 10-18-05, 05:46 PM   #1
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Ike - The End ( RV Idol Round 2 Song )

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left feed on UNF's joint...and Mystic Chaos's Joint....


yea this my song for rv idol round 2....i had no clue what i was gonna say for the intro...i just stepped up and made some crap up...so yea...

its called The End

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Old 10-18-05, 05:54 PM   #2
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yo funny intro yo like the beat...damn hook is nice..defitnly a tight hook....flows dope....yo seriously not THE best but ONE of ur best songs i heard...8.5/10..a definite 9/10 if it was longer but otherwise not bad job..keep that shit up
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Old 10-18-05, 05:59 PM   #3
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lol @ the intro, not bad for an intro... deso.

good thing bout this beat, it goes well wit ya voice..

chorus - catchy as hell, i heard it once and it's still in my head

verse - lyrics pretty decent... i predict you gonna get the best delivery, because your voice is naturally strong, remind me of Pac because you don't need a lotta energy to have good delivery. But at the same time it's flexible which is good, you don't sound boring or anything.. Some parts I feel like you scare the shit outta the beat (I already told you what I mean by that)... Sometimes you can overdo the emotion and prolly don't notice it.

I have no doubt that you won't get voted out this round, you put the stakes real high for everyone else in the competition... This was real hot and I wanted to hear more. Good job on Delivery and flow.
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Old 10-18-05, 06:20 PM   #4
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i'm listenin too this right now.....your intro's pretty cool.....lol....not too funny but the lil voice makes me kinda laugh......the beats fuckin sick...damn......your flows fuckin bangin on this.......lyrics are pretty sick.......man this songs a pretty damn good song.....keep this shit coming.....whered you get this beat at???

overall 9.5/10
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Old 10-18-05, 07:50 PM   #5
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^^^ it was the beat given for the 2nd round of RV Idol.....
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Old 10-18-05, 08:12 PM   #6
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ahh for real?? damn that shits fire who ever found its a genius
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Old 10-18-05, 08:14 PM   #7
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LOL @ the intro, its pretty funny man. the beat you used i'm not sure if I've ever heard it before but I like it. the flow you had is very good, the emotion is very very good it helped me remember the lyrics better and while I'm speakin bout the lyrics Ima say that they were on lock fa sho. this whole track is on lock. You like it and as do I

Ever since I was born, man they knew I was a soldier.....
If you claim the crown, just know I'm takin over

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Old 10-18-05, 09:05 PM   #8
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ahh for real?? damn that shits fire who ever found its a genius



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Old 10-19-05, 02:22 AM   #9
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whoever MADE it was a genious...lol....nah good lookin on findin that beat tho Q
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Old 10-19-05, 11:35 AM   #10
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o yea

ur flow was nice here

good delivery


lyrics were str8


commanded the beat with presence


7.5-8/10


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Old 10-19-05, 09:29 PM   #11
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thanks.......................
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