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Old 11-12-05, 05:12 PM   #1
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how come?

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Feelings so poor

A Tear came out blue

Feelings so broken,

He thought *his girl* came true

but guess its time he should be awoken

He thought that she had loved him,

But if that was true,

Why hasnt she said,"I Love You Too."
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Old 11-30-05, 02:38 PM   #2
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nicce . im sure ppl can relate . well done , just i think if u made it longer it be amazingly well done u know but its good ......... keep it up
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