Christian Rap? How you gon consider that//
You probably ain't a real M.C. plz don't consider rap//
But consider this, son my flows are limitless//
and since you so close to god...damn man invison this//
At the last meal Jesus wasn't there sippin cris//
or on stage bustin rhymes screaming "I gets mines!"//
Please take time to stop the epidmic//
that's right i said it....Phrophecy is back and more prophectic//
Your pathetic...Holy Hustla Records huh//
fubbaucubba uh...if you ain't got it yet.. nigga i'll murder ya//
You're muthafuccin rediculous//
Exit stage left like Snagglepuss...cuz ya scared ta fuccin read this//
Step to my block nigga i'll smack ya ass past Africa//
You'll come back lookin like Mike Tyson was jabbin ya//
I'm surprised that Christ himself hasn't upon you cast death//
and they way i'd conquer what's left...I'm like a fuccin Aztec//
Lil pussy i pray that you respond back//
How are you even black?//
You got ripped by M.C. Firetruck...Explain that?// (No diss to firetruck)
Can't even except a fuccin battle invite//
you the target insight//
YO ASS BOUTZ TA DIE TONIGHT!!!!!//

It's fuccin ridiculous....half rappin ass mafucca! GangStarShit is basically RV's Satan in the text...i'm suprised that ya ass even was let on this damn sight! Then gon say my mafuccin name in that damn cypher! You ain't got no damn business even thinkin bout me! Nigga You don't want it wit me! You might as well walk somewhere else and try that 50 Cent bullshit! That don't work wit me! Ask Ill Techneque!, Ask GKillaz , ask fuccin Hot Sauce, Ask fuccin *NICE*, They fuccin know! I'm good wit dem niggaz c'mon man hit that shit up wit noobs! Next time you wanna just up and start shit...set up the damn battle no questions asked! and by the way ^^^^ This shit up there ain't even serious...i'm just fuccin wit you! I ain't even serious! KEEPS MY MAFUCCIN NAME OUT YA MOUF!

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That's Beast!!!!!!!!!!!!

Christian Rap? How you gon consider that//
You probably ain't a real M.C. plz don't consider rap//
^..ok,worded bland.
But consider this, son my flows are limitless//
and since you so close to god...damn man invison this//
^..Good rhyming,but where is the diss?,and wtf should he invision?dumb,unthoughful bar.
At the last meal Jesus wasn't there sippin cris//
or on stage bustin rhymes screaming "I gets mines!"//
^..No rhyme..and again,no sense,so what if jesus didn't sip cris or scream on a stage?..wtf?
Please take time to stop the epidmic//
that's right i said it....Phrophecy is back and more prophectic//
^..self glory,which is ok,but..this was wack,and very unoriginal.
Your pathetic...Holy Hustla Records huh//
fubbaucubba uh...if you ain't got it yet.. nigga i'll murder ya//
^..Liked the 1st line,2nd was shit.
You're muthafuccin rediculous//
Exit stage left like Snagglepuss...cuz ya scared ta fuccin read this//
^..poor rhyming,decent punch.
Step to my block nigga i'll smack ya ass past Africa//
You'll come back lookin like Mike Tyson was jabbin ya//
^..Good,your first good bar.
I'm surprised that Christ himself hasn't upon you cast death//
and they way i'd conquer what's left...I'm like a fuccin Aztec//
^..OK,pretty decent.
Lil pussy i pray that you respond back//
How are you even black?//
^..He never said he was black.He even posted his pic in member mugshots,he's white,and open about it.
You got ripped by M.C. Firetruck...Explain that?// (No diss to firetruck)
^..This would have been good,but you said "no diss to firetruck"..meaning firetruck ain't wack.So..why would Jroy feel bad about losing to firetruck,who,in your eyes,is not wack?Makes no sense.
Can't even except a fuccin battle invite//
you the target insight//
YO ASS BOUTZ TA DIE TONIGHT!!!!!//
^..Blah,boring shit right here.

Ok..weak ass verse.Full of lines that didn't make sense and lines that were boring.Saying "yo azz boutz ta die tonight!!" is boring,gay,wack,unoriginal,played..etc.

U need work.

pretty long but pretty weak i agree with him^^^. You need more punches with metas

Gangstarshit aint Jroy.

J > you.

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lol i think i remember dis kid When i Was Dirty D or D-Rock going back wit dis sucka in da diss the person above you forum anyways....Natural Killa said it best but im gon say it better....Get a 9 to 5 cuz you droppin lines aint gone get you any shine

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Project List

The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.

Also the shit after your wack rhyme wasn't even neccesarry. You say you wasn't serious but i think you got serious E-Thug problems. And Basicly I think J would rip you. Up ya game up kid.

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Project List

The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.