check check

i guessing im a checking in.................ill prob do like 8 bars

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2709554
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225600

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2712057

witzzz in ur name, but thats somethin u lack.
so ima merk u bitch and chew u like a snack.
ima merk this bitch and make him loose again
u like blood on a white tee,rv's unforgettable stain
zzz in ya name cus u make people fall asleep with ur lyrics
good thing u never do audio cus u spit shit and know one would hear it
u here to attack, but u fight like a girl.
all i do is open my mouth and u flyin in swirls
my words got u in twirls. and u cant find ur way out.
u couldnt draw ur way outta paper bag if u cut some holes out.
so wut u about. wanting to battle me ill leave u star struck
so when i finish this verse theres a 100% chance that u Fucked

^ Goddamn that was a horrible read..
You're bad enough to make me start to hate TuPac and weed!
I'm 0-1... cuz last week i didnt vote
Your 0-1 cuz you got flawlessed and made for a joke
Recognize.. ya lines just dont hit man
They have no impact.. like when bubbles land
I'm keyin this and clownin you ...makin ya feel dumb
JC is a Real bum... beat him like a steel drum
He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

^ Goddamn that was a horrible read..
You're bad enough to make me start to hate TuPac and weed!
I'm 0-1... cuz last week i didnt vote
Your 0-1 cuz you got flawlessed and made for a joke
He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

VS

Nuthin

V/merk....this was onesided as fuck...jc u are improving but get some new concepts for ur punchs an better personal...u had alot of played shit...merk u came wit a decent verse u had better personals and some punchs u get my vote

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damn, this battle was prob the weakest i've seen so far, merk took this cause jc didn't have any good punches, lots of played concepts and no hard hittin direct punchlines or personals. both need to elevate but i've told jc tha a bunch of times...

v/merk

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God damn. This battle was fucking weak. And fuck am I leaving a detailed vote for such a sucky match.

Merkowitzz clearly took this battle with a weak keyed verse probably put up in a couple of minutes. He had like one funny bar and that was it, the rest was filler shit and sub-par. JC came wack as fuck, that was some newbie style verse from like 2004 and shit. The punches weren't there, he used that "something in your name" setup TWICE and both were wack as hell. The only thing that was half decent was the multies he had in his verse making it flow well, and even they were basic as hell. Overall both battlers pretty much sucked ass, merk takes the battle though for having at least one bar worth mentioning.

V/ - Merkowitzzz

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Up over no-shows.

He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

VS

Nuthin

this battle sucked ass. and that topeka line was pretty bad, but it was an effort atleast to try wordplay so I guess i quoted closest thing to a quote. damn, weak battle. JC real improving, but keep trying man.

v/Merk

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^ Goddamn that was a horrible read..
You're bad enough to make me start to hate TuPac and weed!
I'm 0-1... cuz last week i didnt vote
Your 0-1 cuz you got flawlessed and made for a joke
Recognize.. ya lines just dont hit man
They have no impact.. like when bubbles land
I'm keyin this and clownin you ...makin ya feel dumb
JC is a Real bum... beat him like a steel drum
He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch


vs.

Nothing.


Not that Mertz came good, just the other guy made mertzz look like some pro GOD.

Lol @ the tupac line tho.

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em ur mother is a crack whore kims a known slut so whats halie goin to be when she grews up?

Nothing

vs.

He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

Vote - Merkowitzzz

^ Goddamn that was a horrible read..
You're bad enough to make me start to hate TuPac and weed!
He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

vs

nothing

He's not gay... his girl dances and strips
But even in Kansas I wouldnt pay Topeka the bitch

v.

nothing at all.

horrible battle if i must say, but merk had the better verse.

v/ merk.