il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time
i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain

- thats the only part i liked, the other stuff was eh, you had a few played concepts too.-


vs.

It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
Bitch, I've taken the best on this site, while you just target wacks
Your raps ain't exlcusive. .
. .that's just where you BEGGED me to be your partner at
Found this funny, just becuz i used to be on that site
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts


v/Mem.

Alot of his was worded alot better, his quotes where better. But he also had some parts that where reallll ehhhhh. but he still took it. good battle.

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em ur mother is a crack whore kims a known slut so whats halie goin to be when she grews up?

I'll vote on the battles where both verses are posted and edit the links in here.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225600
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225597
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225599

i personally think daubs started out pretty good and ended pretty bad.

il hurt you and your mate, you comin with fake rhymes
kick sharona in his dick and break your teeth at the same time

that was pretty good, but

i got news for this dude so passin messages is my game
so il leave him a bulletin....his skull and his brain

that was kinda eh, in fact, i've seen kemp do the same wordplay, and it was way better, i'm not feeling the concept anymore.

v.

It's true as hell too. . that was trash, it's obvious this dude's pen sucks
So I'ma just drop some shit. . but I'll still offer a hand so you can get up
You flipped once. . went back and decided to repeat the nonsense
I was planning to Key this verse. . but I wanted to KEEP my concepts

those four lines were fire.. and you had some other cool shit too, felt it a lot


v/ mimesis, no doubt.. overpowered in this battle. overall betta verse.