flow kinda off, or i couldn't really catch it... but then again, freestyles don't have to flow like traditional verses..... i like the topic area, but a little too haphazard for my taste.... like, it was deep, but depth done on purpose is depth without a purpose... anyways, i still was feelin it, but think about what i said... stay up playa, and keep spittin...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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