what's hot:
delivery, emotion, and flow are all on point good shit.
Hook fuckin' dope. nicely paned as well.
shit everything about ca'lam's verse was ill. all dope

what's coo:
lyrics nice. nothing whoaaaa, but all good
quality kon lol
beat got weird feel to it, but still coo

what's not:
nothing really

Overall, tight ass track. beat only shit i ain't like. the wind down shit before ca'lam came on. REOFL I thought track was ending LAST TIME I X'D out. rofl
shit let me go back and feed on ca'lam. aiight overall dope ass track. ill shit. 8.7/10

EZ

thx bro. i appreciate the feedback.

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first verse...quality was ehhhhhhhh ok..lyrics was straight to me..and the emotion was good too..flow was good..

second verse..quality was the same and the emotion was the same too..lyrics were still there too u didnt fall off or anything like that...nice drop from you son..

Calam..YOU SUCK NIGGA!!..sike nah lol..quality is good as usual..do i hear dubs from Calam..?!..ha lol..anyway...flow was good..lyrics were ok..kinda seemed like this wasnt the type of tracks u make but it was still an ok drop son..

holla..

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yeah i appreciate it bro. i gotchu wenever u need an rtf

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word duke. yea im tryna spread my genre you know nikka . workin on that new style i told you bout -_-

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okay typing as I listen...beat starts out koo...hmmm first verse is sounding kinda muddy...you really need to open the vocals up with some eqing...however this is the smoothest flow I ever heard from kontro....ok calam showing off his choirboy sound lol...the vocal performance of the hook was good but it sounded crowded in the mix...if you put a delay or something on backing vocals to give them that separation an let the lead vocal shine through so people know what your singing this woulda been a beast hook as is its nice...loving the melody but I sitting here like damn that sounds good but wtf did he say? ok calam verse...whoa calam using dubs? I thought you hated how those sounded wit ya voice? anyways it really adds to verse...you shoulda echoed ya dubs in spots with a nice trail echo woulda really worked with ya voice...both yall lyrically was on sum intro spective shit but nothing bananas...I didn't get the sense yall was feeling what u was spitting..jus rhythmicly talking about yall situations ya follow me? calam's delivery coulda been stronger...kontro really need to up the mixing...delivery could use variation but all in all it was a good track just coulda been better stay up...1

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yeah been hearing that all day. haha vocals needs polishing coo

nice feedback

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nigga fucc yo COUCH!!!!!

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first thing i noticed was the quality which was good.

the first verse came in with a lot of energy. your flow was a little weird but it went well with the song. lyrics are pretty cool. lines like the one about your father were cool.

chorus was STRANGE.

2nd verse comes in with that same energy. lyrically i think the 1st verse was a little better than this one. but you had a little bit of wordplay with that potato line

chorus again is STRANGE.

last verse i like the voice. i think it matches a little more with tha beat. lyrically decent and quality was good.


the only thing i would change is the chorus. other than that this song was pretty good.

iight ^.

uppin. good looks

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word appreciate it .

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