Check ...what you think bout' 20 lines?

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20's fine.

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...33&postcount=10
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...36&postcount=11

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That Old School Mother Fucker

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Crhyme Sindicate

cool then ...Good luck man. see u later dawg.

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Can we make it a topic fliping match? if thats cool or possible. we'll just have kemp drop some words in for us.

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no. its a battle to get into the championship, not a gimmick

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Crhyme Sindicate

aiiight reg it is then...again..gluck

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234085


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so you wanted a concept flipping battle? lmfao

concept flippin? quit jokin, wordz aint stuntin
kids more of a gimmick then the match he wanted
come get it blunted. these flips will have this dude done
i could hunt out these gymnastics in half the battles you won
never good son. repeatedly drops wack editions
so ill flatout beat Wordz till he remains that position
bitch listen. kids dont believe what ya spittin
cause there is Ahgod. . & he made everyone ditch religion
your a weaker division. i gave you the 1-2-1 win, hoe please
im glad you'll be 4-1 there. . now you will match in both leagues
this is a breeze. shit, maybe u do have the better technique
you can have the Contender-. . ill have the LBL -ship match next week
wanna bet me? you werent met for top ten, its bizarre
so this is what happens when you let a joke get too far
leave dude scarred. heres a compliment beyond threats
you resemble Butler, $pit, n shh! with half their concepts
i dont forget. you get no shine in the mag, thats some finish
you made a name for urself in the cypher. . as the worst in it
your reps diminished. concepts ran out, theres no beatin me
so watch him waistlines and roll. . n i aint talking obesity

bitch, you wack

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Crhyme Sindicate

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upping for votes.

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Crhyme Sindicate

word ...Good drop L.I. ....

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L.I.

concept flippin? quit jokin, wordz aint stuntin
kids more of a gimmick then the match he wanted
bitch listen. kids dont believe what ya spittin
cause there is Ahgod. . & he made everyone ditch religion
your a weaker division. i gave you the 1-2-1 win, hoe please
im glad you'll be 4-1 there. . now you will match in both leagues
leave dude scarred. heres a compliment beyond threats
you resemble Butler, $pit, n shh! with half their concepts
i dont forget. you get no shine in the mag, thats some finish
you made a name for urself in the cypher. . as the worst in it

-VS-

Wordz..

So we could drop with no gimicks - Truth is ...I wanted to make it fun
Nick said L.I.s a dick head ...When really - he was just craving for one
I peep'd the stormwatch ...weatherchannel sees none ahead
He told his crew they still alive ----> Its just the thread thats dead
This nerds stress'd - I cut skin off em' to hand em' a tissue
And I'll whipe my ass with Kemps mag ...just to help him press this issue
His rib cage'll crack from pressure - I flow like Pasaidon
I'Dizzle dont come for the L ...But theres always one right besides him

Ok....L.I. had some here n there and overall....not bad. The ones I quoted were cool to me...but the name droppin line almost didn't get quoted tho. I see that often and Im not in every league! Wordz....ya wording there is crazy to me...the set up dosent mesh with the punches well? Besides that...I thought the concepts & personals were o.k. Ya opener wasn't "on & poppin" tho...the wordplay was......ight. Wheel Chair you in the face like old people? they may ride in one but there not gonna chair you in the face....unless ya Grandmas RUTHLESS!! "G's" up NIGGA!

Anyways...V/ L.I.

Wordz...it was ya wording to me that lost it for you.

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Thanks for the Vote Brock...ma Granny be fucking niggaz up at the home dawg...lol..coz she got that shit where you forget where you at sometimes so she be going crazy swinging shit and knocking old niggaz out chairs and shit. Im trying to see what gang I can get her in.lol..

Uppin for more votes

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im gonna do a breakdown on this battle, so you guys can get some decent feedback

L.I

concept flippin? quit jokin, wordz aint stuntin
kids more of a gimmick then the match he wanted
- nah, too simple...not effective enough...OK at best
come get it blunted. these flips will have this dude done
i could hunt out these gymnastics in half the battles you won
- eh, get it but wtf...doesnt hit
never good son. repeatedly drops wack editions
so ill flatout beat Wordz till he remains that position
- not bad
bitch listen. kids dont believe what ya spittin
cause there is Ahgod. . & he made everyone ditch religion
- flipped better before by others
your a weaker division. i gave you the 1-2-1 win, hoe please
im glad you'll be 4-1 there. . now you will match in both leagues
- could have been worded better, but...nice
this is a breeze. shit, maybe u do have the better technique
you can have the Contender-. . ill have the LBL -ship match next week
- nah
wanna bet me? you werent met for top ten, its bizarre
so this is what happens when you let a joke get too far
- ok, even tho callin someone a joke is played this was fresh
leave dude scarred. heres a compliment beyond threats
you resemble Butler, $pit, n shh! with half their concepts
- nah, too statementish
i dont forget. you get no shine in the mag, thats some finish
you made a name for urself in the cypher. . as the worst in it
- played concept, but this was ok
your reps diminished. concepts ran out, theres no beatin me
so watch him waistlines and roll. . n i aint talking obesity
- blah, ive read that wordplay a few times recently

Wordz Ahgod

firstly, WTF is up with that font man??? it sucks, makes your shit harder to read

This kids dead to rap but my kicks could make his Hip-Hop
I'll bury and sandle you - so as much as you flip words...L.I.'ll still flop
- not bad, ok opener
So we could drop with no gimicks - Truth is ...I wanted to make it fun
Nick said L.I.s a dick head ...When really - he was just craving for one
- nah
I peep'd the stormwatch ...weatherchannel sees none ahead
He told his crew they still alive ----> Its just the thread thats dead
- weak man....
you should minimize yourself, ...The real Big .L. pass'd back in 99' son'
But you remind me of em' ..'Coz his era's where you get most your lines from
- lol, predicted this when I read your set-up...concepts PLAYED tho
Man ...L.I. can die young, Break a nail and get his hair pulled off
'Coz if this nigga legendary ...just add em' to the body count like SPul does
- nahh, I get it...but dont like the punch
But check it, L.I. aint fly - But I could knock em in his bird chest
I dont want to call you homeless - but I got to ...'coz Home'none' aint a word yet
- lmao, wtf was this?
This nerds stress'd - I cut skin off em' to hand em' a tissue
And I'll whipe my ass with Kemps mag ...just to help him press this issue
- hows that dissin him? could have worded it MUCH better
'Coz L'dizzles can AIM and still miss the target - man this kids fake
I'll do like Bow wow and hold it down -------> Till' his wrist breaks
- nah
His rib cage'll crack from pressure - I flow like Pasaidon
I'Dizzle dont come for the L ...But theres always one right besides him
- nah
Bitch, you could take a-fence like a sale at Home Depot
You dont need to take a seat ...but I wheel'chair you in the face like old people
- doesnt rhyme, n forced

to be honest, this was a pretty weak cotendership match...both did not have any real DOPE lines - n yeh, I was pretty harsh with the breakdown but it was all in honesty - L.I, you had some decent/ok lines, some were just too played for my likin and others were just weak/simple...Wordz, I liked some of your concepts but your wording really let you down - seen you come better man, actually seen you both come better but I got L.I taking this

Vote - L.I