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Old 12-31-06, 10:35 AM   #1
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29. Apex (0-0) vs. 30. Chris Stylez (0-0)

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Old 12-31-06, 02:05 PM   #2
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In. I'm going 14.
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Old 12-31-06, 03:11 PM   #3
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ok..... then i'll match
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Old 01-01-07, 04:22 PM   #4
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You suck dude, honestly…

See I know you send jabs and hooks, but you miss piles,
Sure I'll bob and weave, since that’s the only thing that Chris Stylez,

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You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
Fat queer, not league material, but don’t get pissed cuz,
I hurt you but don’t leave now…
When I left ya leg tournament to break that shit off,
From Georgia? Bitch if your hood then the map failed,
After peeps read mah verse, they realize your already AT L,
So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
Your queer man, and your not smart, & your face? I bend all,
Don’t think you have a great mind just because you like your mental,
S’fucked how gay you are man, you be all up in mens’ grills dude,
In this world, it’s all about the benjamins…
Yet you went a step further & dated Bills too,
See truly I hate you, that’s why against me you’ll hit the floor fast,
See you got off on the wrong foot, my other one’s still up your ass,

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Awwww, that’s cute kid, Always Faithful couldn’t be more nice,
See your faithful to your friends…
Which explains why your right hand serves the most purpose in your life,

18. Match me.
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Old 01-04-07, 11:38 PM   #5
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Cares less if ya back to text, just get off da apex of my bone
Either you were banned or just have a bad alias...if not
This the underfunded version of the Attack of the clones
Dont think cuz u rhyme u can start shinning with me
Only reason you shine when you rhyme is cuz u shining with teeth
And that yellow is blinding to me,So stop tryna piss in my zone
Is kinda sad that ya urine n ya teeth coincide witcha skin tone
Stop worrying about me brushing up on my skills
When you need to start brushing up on ya grill
But anyways......
I guess you really wanna see some tight lines in sixteens
No worry i'll make the fit,i'll just post a pic of the tight linen of ya jeans
Lets switch the scene with time in a crunch.
We can do this punch for punch...or eye for eye and be blind in this race
I pick option two, cuz it better than having to see your ugly face
I swear...your worst then ugly broads on them matchmaker communities
These false personals I got emunity
But i do give you a thumbs up, for bringin something new to me


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Old 01-05-07, 04:30 AM   #6
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Apex
See I know you send jabs and hooks, but you miss piles,
Sure I'll bob and weave, since that’s the only thing that Chris Stylez,
a knitting punch lol

You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
ight,just

Fat queer, not league material, but don’t get pissed cuz,
I hurt you but don’t leave now…
When I left ya leg tournament to break that shit off,
not feelin the w/play

From Georgia? Bitch if your hood then the map failed,
After peeps read mah verse, they realize your already AT L,
ight

So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
not feelin it, yes i do get it, best out ,suck in

Your queer man, and your not smart, & your face? I bend all,
Don’t think you have a great mind just because you like your mental,
dont like that bend all

S’fucked how gay you are man, you be all up in mens’ grills dude,
In this world, it’s all about the benjamins…
Yet you went a step further & dated Bills too,
nice

See truly I hate you, that’s why against me you’ll hit the floor fast,
See you got off on the wrong foot, my other one’s still up your ass,
ight
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Semper_fidelis

Awwww, that’s cute kid, Always Faithful couldn’t be more nice,
See your faithful to your friends…
Which explains why your right hand serves the most purpose in your life,
ight

stylez
Cares less if ya back to text, just get off da apex of my bone
Either you were banned or just have a bad alias...if not
This the underfunded version of the Attack of the clones
cares less?? not feelin the bar as well

Dont think cuz u rhyme u can start shinning with me
Only reason you shine when you rhyme is cuz u shining with teeth
repetitive

And that yellow is blinding to me,So stop tryna piss in my zone
Is kinda sad that ya urine n ya teeth coincide witcha skin tone
this doesnt work at all, only cos youd have to be rascist to even
find this remotely funny,not sayin you are, just doesnt work for me


Stop worrying about me brushing up on my skills
When you need to start brushing up on ya grill
simple

But anyways......
I guess you really wanna see some tight lines in sixteens
No worry i'll make the fit,i'll just post a pic of the tight linen of ya jeans
not feelin it

Lets switch the scene with time in a crunch.
We can do this punch for punch...or eye for eye and be blind in this race
I pick option two, cuz it better than having to see your ugly face
not feelin it

I swear...your worst then ugly broads on them matchmaker communities
These false personals I got emunity
But i do give you a thumbs up, for bringin something new to me
hmmm

Apex got this to me, just more consistant his bars had less filler,
meaning the set up lines matched the punchlines better, also the
bar of the match for me was the dated bills one,

stylez, im not the best, but you need to work on making your
bars more cohesive and wity, or at least put a nasty streak
in your lines, no hate but you should put this in the elevation
feedback thread, im sure it will help you to work your craft a
lil better...

V/Apex
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Old 01-05-07, 04:54 AM   #7
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You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
S’fucked how gay you are man, you be all up in mens’ grills dude,
In this world, it’s all about the benjamins…
Yet you went a step further & dated Bills too,

VS.

NOTHING.


Wow, one-sided as fuck. Now I may seem a bit harsh for saying this but that verse from Chris was fucking shockingly bad. I've seen you drop so much better than that, so I'm guessing you've got a bit of rust going. Your wording was off and weak in practically every bar and the way you stretched some of those bars was just outstanding man, lol. You had some played concepts and some shit that didn't even make any sense. You need some serious elevation dude. Apex had a decent verse, nothing special... and WHAT THE FUCK!! You dropped an L line... what the hell is wrong with you man!?!?!?! Those quotables I put up were nice and overall you killed this battle easily.

V/ - Apex
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Old 01-05-07, 12:22 PM   #8
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Apex with the flawless.


I thought his last segment was really gay, and the 98 was sort'a played, but aside from those it was an easy win. i liked the benjamins line and the best out thing. overall, you did enough to get the win pretty handily. Chris, on the other hand came with pretty much nothing with a horrible flow. the structure was terrible. you came with nothing whatsoever and essentially gave up the battle.


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Old 01-05-07, 03:08 PM   #9
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Lol, I'm rusty as fuck actually. Thanx for the votes guys.

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Old 01-05-07, 04:05 PM   #10
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You’re a computer freak, & you’re the only one fat here,
How do you have a 9-8 record…
And you’ve been into text battling since that year,
LOL
So don’t bother droppin, cuz all your verses be suckin to me,
We don’t argue that your not the best out, since you suck IN the league,
IT’S NOT GREAT BUT OK
Your queer man, and your not smart, & your face? I bend all,
Don’t think you have a great mind just because you like your mental,
I LIKE THE WORDPLAY
See truly I hate you, that’s why against me you’ll hit the floor fast,
See you got off on the wrong foot, my other one’s still up your ass,
WHOA

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NOTHING

VOTE APEX

The problem with Cris’s lines is none of them really stood out to me. Accouple of them was just Jokes that fell flat somewhere. The opener was waaay too stretched. I almost quoted the “Linen of your Jeans” thing but the way you worded it just wasn’t good e-nuff to me. Oh and don’t center the verse, that’s just gay. Apex wins off having better personals and insults that had more of a sting to it
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Old 01-06-07, 12:05 AM   #11
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Uppin over no-shows
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Old 01-06-07, 11:25 PM   #12
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Old 01-07-07, 01:22 AM   #13
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Because I'm closing battles unexpectedly early and didn't announce that people had to get links in by now, Apex will still get the win.

Apex WINS 1-0
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