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The Scholar

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GBA Champion

Axe

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The Scholar

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you

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GBA Champion

Axe

FAME

I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. .
....which proves they didn't read your battle last weeK
ight

No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!
not really a harsh diss

Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw
you made the Top Punches...
even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all
not really a harsh diss

Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit
but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list!
ok i see what your tryin to do now, take his punches away from
him, ill consider that in my final vote

Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
not feelin it

Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg?
her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. .
....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers!
lil humour

You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
ight

This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude
Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
not feelin it, should really close with one of the better bars of your verse

VITT

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
ight lil humour

If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
ight

Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
ehh

Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
end rhyme

Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
ehh

Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
ehh w/play

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
ehh

Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
lol

Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
ehh

I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
ehh

I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you
not feeling it

well id have to give this to fame, although i think vit had the best bar,
he dropped 22 lines to fames 16, when fame dropped first, which is
fucked as i think if Vitt had of took some of the bars out he prolly
could of took this, but as it stands fame would have to take this for
better consistancy, and i cant really make a choice on which bars
to take outta Vitts verse to make it fair,

V/Fame

Faime S. Quotez

I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. .
....which proves they didn't read your battle last week!
^^Shitty wording. The punch is kind of weak, too.

No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!
^^Blah, plain.

Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw
you made the Top Punches...
even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all
^^Okay... still not very hard hitting.

Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit
but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list!
^^Bad.

Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
^^Lame.

Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg?
her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. .
....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers!
^^Okay.

You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
^^Could have hit a lot harder, good concept - poor delivery.

This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude
Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
^^Wack.






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Vitticus

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
^^Predictable nameplay, decent delivery.

If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
^^This could have been flipped SO much better. Really watered down.

Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
^^Lame.

Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
^^Lame.

Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
^^Blah.

Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
^^I liked the concept, not the execution.

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
^^You should have tried dissing yourself in the set-up... or something - just to tie it in. Pretty gay.

Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
^^I'm digging the hell outta hte concept, but the delivery is shitty.

Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
^^True, but not hitting.

I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
^^What? No....

I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you
^^Gay.






This battle was reallly weak. However, I think Vitticus barely edged it out due to his concepts. Both had reallllly bad execution that took away from the impact of the punches.

Vote:
Vitticus






oh yeah:


so you might get dqed :/

No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!

VS.

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"



This battle was really poor, and I only quoted bars based from the quality of this battle. Faime tends to focus on the same concept in his verses all the time and half his shit comes out like a statement. You need to be using a fresh concept for each bar not using one concept for half a verse and then another to finish the shit off. And Vitt, man... you really need to work on your wording because right now it just ain't working. I'm finding it difficult to find the flow of your verse and whilst it is TEXT... you should at least have some sort of flow going.. try using some multies in there. Right now it just seems like your verse is a long run on paragraph.

Anyway, Vitt was better and he won.

V/ - Vitticus

Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
.........played concept alot of people use against faime S qoutes
If you paid me to say your good wouldn't tell, just asmit your dumb aswell
Well I see you tried this week...
Were playing Hide N' Seek and I'll tell ya, your punches can hide good as hell
/......sort of filler to me ...
Slap Faime for thinking nameplay was complex and shit, dropped more shit
My shit hit four ribs just to get the point across, this match is fuking whorage
.....Decent nothing specail though..
Prick is funny I aint seen a bitch like him for weeks and weeks, see my friend
Takes a Champion to notice he'll lose, but he can't even predict when he'll win
......Same as above....
Common bars just to win you I say he should surrender or w/e whore bitch
He must wear a 5 1/2 but It looks like he's gonna make the fucking forfeit
Someone tell me if he knew he'd NEVER win why does this whore battle?
Never left clues, but he stands up & this bitch manages to have foreshadows
Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
Get real your concepts played and forced never relate to a fast geek, fag
Your fake personals aint personal they just always reffer to last weeks mag
I saw your battles it's the same thing everytime it all sounds the same
You shouldn't even be ranked...
He has two 2's that fell pretty homo just by being around his name
I'll pound this lame and no I'm not trying to sound insane, but skank its true
And plus, people outside this league are making a better name than you

the rest of your verse was jus basically a little of played concepts and a nice personal in one bar but nuttin worth mentioning

Vs.

I don't post my best, guess that's why I have to battle trash geeks
they said I had the wackest battle. .
....which proves they didn't read your battle last week!
No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!
Both ...Nice pair of bars to open up with ...
Congrats- you came 28th, you can almost say your writtens are raw
you made the Top Punches...
even though you were 3 spots away from not being mentioned at all
Nuttin special....
Yeah I was 2nd in Worst Punches, I couldn't believe what I spit
but don't laugh too hard... you weren't that far behind me on the list!
Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
Both bars couldve been worded better.....
Your girl is a freak to everyone but you, why mess with her dawg?
her hobby is pics of celebs in her panties. .
....cause she likes Faime S. in her drawers!
Lolll......funny...
You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
Facts are always nice punchez...
This week, don't even vote cause you'll lose, take days off dude
Vitt'll not vote and lose again so quick.. he'll call this a dejavu
Decent ender...

Overall man your verse was basically better than wat your opponent was dropping so thats why i give

My V/ Faime S Qoutez.

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*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Your friends run train on ya chick, but you always spanking her last
in fact, Vitt's the 28th person... like his rank in the mag
OK JAB AT HIM
You battled Stanza, beat him but didn't vote and lost? I'll end this dude
^cause that says, you're so whack.. even if you win, you'll lose!
GOOD SHIT


VS


Shit If I were you I'd be ashamed to rap first, or maybe you just act herbish
If you got Faime S. Quotes, why the fuck do you end up with wack verses?
OUCH!!!
Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can
KINDA FUNNY
Your personals suck and getting personal is just me again having fun wit'cha
His bars are jewish Holidays for sure under all of em' all we say is "Huhnikka?"
FOR SOME REASON LMAO @ THIS CAUSE I CAN PICTURE THAT


VOTE: VITTICUS

Fame’s main problem was he kept refering to the mag like that was all he had. There’s other ways to get personals. Vit, your shit is waaaaay too stretched man but you had the better punchline concepts. I’ll give the Ideas Credit to make up for the shaky wording and the blatant bitchmove way of winnin battles by spittin way more lines than the other guy.

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No wait.. he got his name noticed, thought he was sonnin 'em
he dropped 16 bars in the cypher. .
....and got mentioned for only one of 'em!

VS.

Why the fuck were you even born? they should'a slap you with two hands
Matter of fact It's pitiful as fuck cuz' I can diss myself better than you can

Faimez can't seem to find any new concepts and just drops the same ones every week and they read like statements, which is never a good thing, Vitticus struggled with his wording and this was reflected in the huhnikka line. However, seeing as Vitticus attempted to be witty with his punches instead of spitting out statements all over his verse he won.

V/ Vitticus

Uppin over no-shows