i posted this as a keystyle your haert out at first but despite the first line i would like to know what yall think, so please hit me back with some criticism.


i dont give a fuck what you think about this ryme im bout to spit,
cause its about a girl that i know and this chick is the shit,
i take a look in her eyes and see nothin but passion,
so hott she has cars drivin down the streets swervin and crashin,
and im just laughin, cause i know that shes all mine,
havin a girl this beautifull should be considered a crime,
even if it was a crime i wouldnt even care,
she got the softest skin and the most gorgeous hair,
and nothin in this universe can keep us from being side by side,
a few people have tried but unfortunitely for them they died,
cause im one of the protective and jealous type of guys,
when you talk to my girl you better stay lookin at her eyes,
and if your eyes stray and wonder to her chest,
ill be right there waiting to put a hollow point through your sweater vest,
and speeking of this girls eyes, i get lost in them for hours,
cause there more beautiful and greener than the grass after the april showers,
i was a lost boy but thanks to her ive been found,
im forever her servant till im six feet under the ground,
some may call that being whipped but i call that LOVE,
we go together like a hand inside a rubber glove,
she's got a body like a godess and the most soothing voice,
if i can marry any woman in the world, she would definitly be my only choice,
i used to smoke marijuana to get me high,
but now i get higher than any drug just when i see her walk by,
i get a head rush every time that we touch,
leavin me weak in the knees i need to hold myself up with a cruch,
i can hardly handle her beauty, sometimes i stop breathin,
i ask her how long we well be together and she says she's never laevin,
so you know what that means, i got this girl for life,
my prayers have been answered, i have found wife,
i may not have much but ill give ger my heart,
and live forever together till death do us part.

Dedicated to: Natalie K.