man i try to make ya listen but all ya jus hooked on dissin,
i love to ryhme+write,fuck thats y i joined this site.
if i give it go,2 u it sounds slow!
but dont hate on it,put ur name on it,
give me a hand,on the shit i dont understand.
iv got the flow,but my structure is a no,
jus abit of advice and my shit will blow,ya know.
1st things first il get a story to my verse,
my word play is too basic,but i can make it...........
better!! like learning how to get a woman alittle wet'er,
practice,this is a fact this!!!
more time,more effort,this must be a definate.....
2 succeed,give me wot i need and i'll open myself up and plant that seed!

well u have to make sure ur syllables match up..that way ur flow will go together...

umm..the words at each line in pairs should rhyme

so like


touchin lamp, shit now im dead
I hate my life lets be alive instead


something like that...

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