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11-23-07, 09:53 PM | #16 | |||
Just searching.
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IP: 28AD 5545
I know, Chad. I know.
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11-24-07, 08:44 AM | #17 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: BB07 9957
man...get at me for that collab
ne-who I do like shadowville beats...but, they tend to be loud-ish U sound like Ebircs when u first came in... I think ur flow is adequate here...but, up ur delivery...hold out the syllables a tad longer... I like ur dubs hook cudda been mixed better: a tad louder, maybe panned differently... not bad for what it was...but, cud def. use a lil polish 1 |
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11-24-07, 03:54 PM | #18 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DBA9 C526
Thanks man.
And I will definitely get at you on that collab. |
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11-24-07, 10:45 PM | #19 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 45D5 0E2B
You gotta work on your lyrics bro...
I think youd benefit from working on beats with a faster tempo... As it stands, some people have the voice for those slow bpm instrumentals and some people just sound fucked... Lyrics though for you is a biggie.............some of those lines were weak as hell my friend... What I suggest.........is you sit there and write a 100 bar track and try to elevate with your multies and flow... Not trying to be rude.......just trying to help you improve..... |
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11-25-07, 05:53 PM | #20 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: D661 6C83
hey, where you livin now? i'm still in the windy city (lethbridge, the real windy city) for another semester anyways.
I like this song man...quality is really good...i like your voice on faster songs, i'd like the flow a lot but it comes a little short...like you the pauses aren't distinguished because of your rhyme scheme. I'm really liking this though the more i listen. Voice is good...presence is upped, but delivery is still a tad less then what you could do though. We still have to meet up and collab www.myspace.com/neighborj message me what you think of the new rough cuts if you have a minute. peace
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11-26-07, 02:36 PM | #21 | ||||||
L.E
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IP: DBA9 C526
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For sure, man, I feel you. Thanks for the advice. Quote:
I'm back in my home town by Edmonton. How is your schooling going? And fuck yeah we have to collab. Thanks for the feed man, I'll hit up your thread. |
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11-26-07, 03:26 PM | #22 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F1C4 E190
yea...only thing i have to say is watch out with the way your sayin things....toward the end starts to take a monotone vibe to it....nyg n phenom got it right tho....clean up a few things smooth it out....n swtich some shit up, n your good to go
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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12-29-07, 12:55 PM | #23 | ||||
L.E
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IP: DBA9 C526
I will be re-recording this soon, so I will post it up when the whole song is done.
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