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Old 08-20-08, 02:50 AM   #1
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Old 08-20-08, 10:34 AM   #2
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Is this pre season or something?..checkk.


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Old 08-21-08, 10:30 PM   #3
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Old 08-22-08, 11:01 AM   #4
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Veteran piss
by: Lay








[Chorus: Eminem]
Mentally illll from Amityvilllle (ILLLL)
Accidentally killll your family stillll
Thinkin he won't? God-damnit he willll (HE'SSSS)
Mentally illll from Amityvilllle




On the inner depths of the internet,
it becomes apparent how pathetic all you sinners get..
when you bite lines from withered vets, simply to give your rep
that little boost of recognition from the satisfaction of the win or lose'
now your cover is blown so admit the truth - you ain't shit you noob!
I hope all you read this while you sit confused, but I'm just lettin loose
to murder all you wanna be's..quick, " go get the noose "..
an the next accused will be justified with more then just a neck thats bruised..


When being cocky's embraced with this copy and paste style
reputations get slandered and sloppy so wait while we
refuse to not be changed so we can arrange trials..
To discover those in disguise an realize they ain't vile
ignore those that were thought worthy, cuz for so
long "gettin this off my chest" meant strippin it from a torso.
Those whores know they've been revealed - their just wishin they didn't
so come back an see us with something thats NOT bitten or mimic'd


Heath, it doesn't get any better than this..
jump off a Ledger just quit or leave an you'll never be missed
Amatuers scream " I Am mature! ", an thats why they drink Veteran Piss
if it wasn't for you faggots there'd be no reason for an Exit to ever exist
whether the gift is naturally a dream, or somethin you make it to live in
your faced with decisions of morales or walk a path of facless intentions
us writers have poised a dominion in which a choice is invisioned
writings about expression of self - not voicing someone elses opinion..



[Chorus: Eminem]
Mentally illll from Amityvilllle (ILLLL)
Accidentally killll your family stillll
Thinkin he won't? God-damnit he willll (HE'SSSS)
Mentally illll from Amityvilllle






This is for everyone who shows up in open mics..bites lines, copies shit..takes credit for other peoples work..this might come off as sort of a diss, but it pissed me off so I thought I'd write about it..
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Old 08-22-08, 02:51 PM   #5
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i sit in the tree, my cheek shivers with a kiss from the breeze
i look in the window, thinkin... how i kill with such ease
i'm fearless indeed, this bitch should've never tested me
i should put'er down on her knees n let her suck this erected meat
she'll be next to see, that ravage knife i wield relentlessly
on plenty of women's bodies after i knock out her precious teeth

breathe

ahhhhhh, now she's in for it, my anger's taking over
so now i think i may say fuck it n break her shoulder
but i told her, but nah, she wouldn't listen to me
now i'm opening the door to her kitchen, it creeks
i hear the shower n now i know what this bitch needs
a cinematic death, but i AM psycho so it fits me
i walk up the steps, could her music be any louder?
i mean, i could run up these shits basically n just crown her
she's so fucking dumb, it's starting not to even be any fun
but i like'em young n this bitch is only like twenty one
so i make it to the bathroom, pull back on the curtain
look into her eyes with vengeance til one things certain
i'm here to kill you... toss my tool in ya skull n just work it
it's finished, but then i saw something i didn't wanna have to see
ME..... it was my reflection in the mirror looking back at me

Mr. Who Are you?

i can't even recognise that look in your eyes
then i fall to the floor as the items inside my core grind
the whore's mine, no yours, I DON'T FUCKING KNOW ANYMORE
all i can remember is this is one of my many chores
killing, robbing, adultery........ SHIT! WHAT ELSE?

the fuck you mean? this is just the hand that's dealt
when you sign those papers looking for glamour n wealth
bitch you better recognise n say thanks for the help


i stand up, chest out.... bold as a rebel
n say simply..... So, I Sold My Soul to the devil
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