I checked you posts dude, Your lines are all lame and generic
The dopest lyrics I saw you write are following Bobericc_
lol kinda clever, i thought this was aight
your bad wording said, battling me made you less dope, now thats a fact
you say I got mad played lines?..........Bobericc, your dog gone whack
lmao yea clever flip off his bar from last week I had to do some research to get this

vs.

mad played nameplays! one way, got your jaw in a foul crunch
trying so hard at tip, weak and get caught in an outter punch..
nah I wasnt feeling this and your rhyme scheme is shaky
he aint texting it raw,
wanted you to 'fill me in on your dopeness' and for sure,
..I fell through the emptiness with less than before!
mmm you gotta work on your wording and you'll be killing shit, but this needs touching up man

v/ one way he came way harder