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Old 02-14-09, 03:47 PM   #1
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Old 02-14-09, 08:11 PM   #2
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llmfao wtf is this?
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Old 02-15-09, 11:32 PM   #3
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do ten jtr, its all gud man................
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Old 02-18-09, 02:47 AM   #4
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Maaaan ya moms a slut, I fucking wrecked the whore
If you're from "where it all started" I guess you live on my bedroom floor
Broke bastard, i'm gonna kill you for trying to pinch dollas
Then "bring on the trumpets" at ya funeral followed by a clown and pinata
Your gender was kept a surprise until birth, but wasn't wat ya old lady hoped
When she said "IS IT A BOY OR A GIRL DOC!?"
and he replied "Uhm, uh.. fuck, the baby's both"
Fucking hermaphrodite, i'll snatch your life, snap ya like a rubber band
Street fighter's dope but when he plays with ken... barbies in the otha hand
That's gay as ya member title, the world's end? Well if it's true and your sure
Atleast I won't have to live on the same planet with you anymore!!
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Old 02-18-09, 06:57 PM   #5
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i bring on the trumpets line coz your shit i just choose to ignore,
soon as u say shit.... i speak up bollocks and the fans stand to applure.
You get wasted most nights to blind ya self from your self owned affection,
dude cant get out of the bathroom coz 1 look in the miror gives himself an erection.
u suck on a bong coz u suck at most things like writting a rap.....
u get stoned so bad for self hipnosis of not knowing where ya battles at.
Dude be a jew day to day on the regular and i think he likes his title,
smash a glass musseltoe coz all the luck in the world to you is vital.
whatever your religon i hate on faggots like u worked up jew,
a word from me...
if i sound racist i dont care coz im embarressed to battle you.


lol real quick key jus didnt have time this week.......
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Old 02-18-09, 07:12 PM   #6
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Maaaan ya moms a slut, I fucking wrecked the whore
If you're from "where it all started" I guess you live on my bedroom floor
lol that was jokes
Broke bastard, i'm gonna kill you for trying to pinch dollas
Then "bring on the trumpets" at ya funeral followed by a clown and pinata
na, weak
Your gender was kept a surprise until birth, but wasn't wat ya old lady hoped
When she said "IS IT A BOY OR A GIRL DOC!?"
and he replied "Uhm, uh.. fuck, the baby's both"
na, weak delivered bad
Fucking hermaphrodite, i'll snatch your life, snap ya like a rubber band
Street fighter's dope but when he plays with ken... barbies in the otha hand
generic, wasn't hard
That's gay as ya member title, the world's end? Well if it's true and your sure
Atleast I won't have to live on the same planet with you anymore!!
weak, wording was bad



bring on the trumpets line coz your shit i just choose to ignore,
soon as u say shit.... i speak up bollocks and the fans stand to applure.
makes no sense to me at all
You get wasted most nights to blind ya self from your self owned affection,
dude cant get out of the bathroom coz 1 look in the miror gives himself an erection.
weak
u suck on a bong coz u suck at most things like writting a rap.....
u get stoned so bad for self hipnosis of not knowing where ya battles at.
na, weak
Dude be a jew day to day on the regular and i think he likes his title,
smash a glass musseltoe coz all the luck in the world to you is vital.
weak, concept is ok but worded bad, wasn't effective
whatever your religon i hate on faggots like u worked up jew,
a word from me...
if i sound racist i dont care coz im embarressed to battle you.
again didn't make sense


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Old 02-18-09, 09:12 PM   #7
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JTR:
Maaaan ya moms a slut, I fucking wrecked the whore
If you're from "where it all started" I guess you live on my bedroom floor

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JTR took this battle for sure... the other guys verse was not very good.
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Old 02-18-09, 09:50 PM   #8
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After reading both verses, I didn't see any really good punches..

However, JTR's first punch was okay, and at least he knew what he was doing.

Brydon, your either ruster or a topical writer, most of your punches
were worded poorly.

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Old 02-19-09, 01:30 AM   #9
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yea this was kind of a warm up for me lol...
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Old 02-19-09, 01:38 AM   #10
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Old 02-23-09, 01:47 PM   #11
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JTR catches the win here.

good job both of u guys...thanks for showin
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