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Old 03-02-09, 08:13 PM   #1
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Old 03-02-09, 08:23 PM   #2
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Old 03-04-09, 07:13 PM   #4
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The police aint got shit on me, their war on drugs is washed and weak
Cause I know all you need is a computer to keep coke off the streets
His generic recycled concepts are predictable, a bogus joke at best
He seems to be screwed off the top, so we know this coke aint fresh
This guy don’t bitch very often, even when the haters are at it again
this dude always rolls with the punches, he must not have any friends
See coke dealer is not a smart dude, I see him as more of an anal fag
When he passes with flying colors, he’s walking by with a rainbow flag
Should learned by now, time to get out the money and sway intentions
But how can he buy his way to the top if he can’t even pay attention
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Old 03-04-09, 07:34 PM   #5
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You a small dick fuck, Your shit's basically just an indent
Cuz no bitches saying OW!! When you on top n in them
Avatar's speak the loudest, a fan of mine you'll always be
Cuz you CD's biggest groupie, your hands are always all over me
N talking drugs aint your lingo, your concepts as old as Uncle Sam
Cuz i'm a 'bear' it all out right now, you just pushing Honey Grams
Beating em' so bad, Had to beg Kris Stubb's just to let me
Make him feel the real american color's, when his face meets a Pepsi
Get off me bro, i drop dope shit, elope real quick, with the taste my fist
Cuz only One Way i dont win, and thats if R/B came n rode ya lil dick

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Old 03-04-09, 08:37 PM   #6
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The police aint got shit on me, their war on drugs is washed and weak
Cause I know all you need is a computer to keep coke off the streets
meh
His generic recycled concepts are predictable, a bogus joke at best
He seems to be screwed off the top, so we know this coke aint fresh
played
This guy don’t bitch very often, even when the haters are at it again
this dude always rolls with the punches, he must not have any friends
badly worded
See coke dealer is not a smart dude, I see him as more of an anal fag
When he passes with flying colors, he’s walking by with a rainbow flag
lol good
Should learned by now, time to get out the money and sway intentions
But how can he buy his way to the top if he can’t even pay attention
no

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You a small dick fuck, Your shit's basically just an indent
Cuz no bitches saying OW!! When you on top n in them
BITTEN naw just playing I used this a long time ago
Avatar's speak the loudest, a fan of mine you'll always be
Cuz you CD's biggest groupie, your hands are always all over me
meh
N talking drugs aint your lingo, your concepts as old as Uncle Sam
Cuz i'm a 'bear' it all out right now, you just pushing Honey Grams
no
Beating em' so bad, Had to beg Kris Stubb's just to let me
Make him feel the real american color's, when his face meets a Pepsi
??????
Get off me bro, i drop dope shit, elope real quick, with the taste my fist
Cuz only One Way i dont win, and thats if R/B came n rode ya lil dick
meh

v/ one way

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Old 03-04-09, 08:40 PM   #7
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See coke dealer is not a smart dude, I see him as more of an anal fag
When he passes with flying colors, he’s walking by with a rainbow flag
The police aint got shit on me, their war on drugs is washed and weak
Cause I know all you need is a computer to keep coke off the streets


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Get off me bro, i drop dope shit, elope real quick, with the taste my fist
Cuz only One Way i dont win, and thats if R/B came n rode ya lil dick




damn, one way your really improving alot. Coke i seen it in you last week dog,
i was like ohhh shit. let me fiiind out this nigga comin back lol. Then this week
i dont know, i just wasnt feeling it. I think you come ya best when you dont focus
so hard on coming strong. Just try n fall back a lil and dont think so hard. You can
come hard, and funny as shit too. Just try not to force shit as much

v/one way (Edit, Everyone understands the pepsi line coke. Its just not good)
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Old 03-04-09, 09:00 PM   #8
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I don't care if this vote counts or not. I'm just breaking it down.

The police aint got shit on me, their war on drugs is washed and weak
Cause I know all you need is a computer to keep coke off the streets
With the set up I thought you had something nice. But punch was ehh
His generic recycled concepts are predictable, a bogus joke at best
He seems to be screwed off the top, so we know this coke aint fresh
Ok, this had potential to be nice. it was coo tho
This guy don’t bitch very often, even when the haters are at it again
this dude always rolls with the punches, he must not have any friends
ehh lame. corny
See coke dealer is not a smart dude, I see him as more of an anal fag
When he passes with flying colors, he’s walking by with a rainbow flag
lol nooo
Should learned by now, time to get out the money and sway intentions
But how can he buy his way to the top if he can’t even pay attention
Coo idea. But it really just doesn't hit.

Overall, some of your past verses were better than this. Seemed you knew you didn't have to try since you got coke. The screwed off the top was coo tho.

Coke:
You a small dick fuck, Your shit's basically just an indent
Cuz no bitches saying OW!! When you on top n in them
this was dumb. Not hard at all. Small dicked you could say
Avatar's speak the loudest, a fan of mine you'll always be
Cuz you CD's biggest groupie, your hands are always all over me
Ok the CD/see D type shit is done to death. But since your initials are CD this had potential. But was worded ehh
N talking drugs aint your lingo, your concepts as old as Uncle Sam
Cuz i'm a 'bear' it all out right now, you just pushing Honey Grams
Wordplay was useless here. No point in even using it. And punch was weak. Don't use wordplay unless you're trying to hit harsh. This wordplay was pointless
Beating em' so bad, Had to beg Kris Stubb's just to let me
Make him feel the real american color's, when his face meets a Pepsi
you serious? lol
Get off me bro, i drop dope shit, elope real quick, with the taste my fist
Cuz only One Way i dont win, and thats if R/B came n rode ya lil dick
WOW... no. Multie's thrown in for no reason. And grammar was fucked too to top it off. And One Way nameplay is old. and too simple. And no son no

Seriously, this wasn't good. I don't see how you complain about voting when you post like this. Seriously step it up if you gon bitch.

I'd vote for One Way. But don't count this. I seen coke bitch enough
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Old 03-05-09, 09:35 AM   #9
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wow, there was only 3 votes in all of that...lol
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both your closers were weak as fuck.coke had horrible syllbell count to his shit that made it hard to follow.both had pretty good punches and concepts pretty even the whole way through.it came down to coke haveing such a choppy flow and one way have such a bettter one that made the diffrence here.while one ways punches hit like smooth jabs cokes were more wild haymakers that didnt seem to strike as stright at m
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good shit

good battle One Way
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The police aint got shit on me, their war on drugs is washed and weak
Cause I know all you need is a computer to keep coke off the streets

vs.

Get off me bro, i drop dope shit, elope real quick, with the taste my fist
Cuz only One Way i dont win, and thats if R/B came n rode ya lil dick

I have it tied with bars.

I'm voting One Way because I liked the rest of his verse better.
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one way wins 5-0

one way 2-0

coke goes to the jump 1-1
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