Johnny- nice imagery man, i felt like you ended it too early though, like there was a point in time that seemed missing or something that should've bridged between him being 21 and 28.. anyways i liked how it wasn't clear what the sickness really was, except that everyone and even himself convinced him he had it. eventually driving to the point of a tainted mind and body. anyways the drop was good read, welldone.

Alpha- this was the topic i was originally going to write to, but i couldn't decide where i was going with my concept, I liked where you took this piece though. it kind of made me feel like the story was coming from a pov of a man who's already awoken from his long lost life of substance abuse. recalling his dreams of reality. anyways i couldn't understand how he was hooked on pills before weed though, that part didnt seem logical, but anyways it was a real read imo, northern lights you say?! lol

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