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03-30-09, 01:59 AM
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Better THAN You!
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My Sunshine
IP: 4EB2 32A1
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=7472477
just fuckin around. felt like doing some shit.
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04-11-09, 05:42 PM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
i think this one is a miss personally dawg... like it caught up at the end, but the begining when u were repeating, wack... the chorus.. wack. you made it ok though with the second verse and the first verse the second part of it not the first cuz first part with all that repeating was weak
this wasn't good in general though, but don't worry bout it dude cuz I think you're dope this was one was just a miss imo but uhh, it doesnt matter though cuz dumb girls will like this cuz it has a sort of mainstream feel to it and it's mushy.
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04-11-09, 09:55 PM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: B738 46A3
BWHAHA no lie..i feel the same way.
I felt the only thing i like was the second verse. but girls did eat it up! hahahaha  its for a mixtape gear'd towards those girls. called "About A Girl" so most of the new shit i'm doing is to finish that. thanks for the honest imput though.
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