i feel like venting... but this ain't a vent, it ain't an evaluation of my thoughts either, its just ish poppin' out, MCs call it keystyling... doesn't matter, its coming out anyway

i'm so pissed, my words come out pain stricken|
this whole list has my brain tickin'-mind frame's tippin'|
i wanna throw fists but i don't, the hate stays hidden|
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i let go and a whole row of wack no-flow cats disappear|
i must of slipped a gear, either i'm blind or everything's clear|
i can't think, i can't hear, i'm stupid, the people cheer|
my legs are useless, the only thing i know now is fear|
the prize money takes up two pockets, i can't even steer|
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nothing's real, my world is made up of lies on top of lies|
-on top of your mother with a slur in a house 1 story high|
who likes to drink and prefers "junkyard" over "pig sty"|
but damn, now i'm starting to make up shit, this act is pretend|
diagnosed with a.d.d. at age ten then given 5 years of meds|
this head's a top spinning-knocking the fuck outta yours|
too poor to pay attention, dictionary definitions streaming out my pores|
... my mind's a pure pond............... but surrounded by putrid shores|
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obsessed with nirvana and poe, a demented mind inside of a mishapen box|
i'm the god of a god whose god is your god!|
its true, you just don't know it yet, you'll call me another net head who's odd|
who's off the walls like light a million times when you flipped the switch to ON|
... or i've heard too many tracks of self-loathing rock|
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the blade friction rises every time i nose dive into depression|
i know to die is to prove existence, but will it ease this tension|
or squeeze a tendon in a finger against a trigger in someone's direction?|
that was the illest line so far... but i don't conduct skill inspections|
but if i did-is this one? hibbidy dibbidy suck my wiggly shig shibbity do-rags are dope|
nope, i guess not, but i got flow so|
-go tell your closest friend that your farthest friend dropped an Open-.................................................. .......-mic|

ps. and add that your farthest friend •madd• is the dopest to ever write








peace






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Pretty Dope Track . . .

lol @ Venting But This Isn't A Vent ..

Flow Was Pretty Nice On This , Content Was Pretty Nice . .

Pretty Dope Little Peice Here.

this had a different kinda scheme and set-up which made it earn originality.Piece wuz hot..Stay ^
-Avi

nice flow some good wordplay vocab cuda bin beta but im still feeling it

good topic 8/10

i was feelin this. shows when you write you write without limits. good imagery. top notch iron boy

peace

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the one that watches the watchmen:

no doubt







































*cough*

too long to read right now, i'll read later

Aight nigga release ya cd player from THE REPEAT BUTTON and play another cd besides the SLIM SHADY LP.....

work on it kid
stop cock pleasin ya Fav rapper by gettin inspired by his 1st cd


Peace...
1.......

........... well rawdeadly, glad you shared your life, doesn't change that fact that you're still wack, but oh well, bitches stay bitches




peace





*cough*

that was sick