Yo peep this...........


Innovatin concepts and skills so complex it kills//
Organic tracks connect the feel...while my context appeals//
And reveals to the conscious the real truth in your conscience//
Life, I've tried to stay calm since, but the non-sense in a person's heart//
Affected by my speech, dispersin darts, with femceein i get deep, rehearsin arts//
Of rippin demon curses apart and turnin schemein verses to smart//
Intelligent rhymes, expressin evident times, usin people to represent minds//
Lovin Allah, respectin his shine, and not fashion designs, or blastin your nines//
Hope these lyrics are bashin they spine so they can striaghten-up//
These words just be relatin what today's troubled eyes be debatin stuck//
Cause all the lies they be makin up this ish got my brain shakin up//
Now i'm wakin up to the beacon of light...while my strifes doublin//
Usin deeping insight still i walk through this life strugglin//
Its quite troublin how all these nigges seem to like bubblin//
Crack for cash just to attract some ass//
This lifstyle, i have to 'pass' like i smash the gas pedals in a new whip//
Now you the assassin blastin metal when ya crew flips//
"Who's -it?"calm your temper son...I'm bout to lose it//
Now you down too quick dropped to ground from two-hits//
Droolin blood like mornings when the dew-drips//
This route..Why chose-it?...cause money you just abuse it//
Losin friends over dividends that you ready to spend//
Now your shoulders full of boulders heavy wit sin//
Listen to the melodyblend...when your lifes ready to end//
Then...You won't get cut by satan's machetti my friend

VErse 2

Scattered and broken dreams, it matters not tho it seems//
Life is just a prism of battered unfocused beams//
Of light in its reflections, except our lives are displayed//
All our joys, sorrow, and pain, our very molds displayed//
Our very souls today, make the Creator so cherish//
Every soul brought forth a new.. and every evil to perish//
I relish in the premonitions, witnessin the depictions//
Of a child bearing my visage, ...the fruits of my prediction//
Concieved in far from harmony,.. but the connection//
Is that the world in which we dwell, is far from perfection//
I offer only protection, but who answers the question//
Without my soulmate as a guide, there are no suggestions//
Only my opinionated gestures seeking pleasurous measures//
As entertaining as the Jester, however stressin the... pressure//
Basically, what I'm saying is life is dazing, amazing me//
Chasing and lacing me with knowledge, still what is.. facing me?//
It's a shame and at the same time. I can't blame//
The perpetrators of the genocide reign failed to maintain//
We're all people so diversity amongst us is labeled lame//
As a reason to murk the next when from one blood we all came//

No chorus....na'mean straight up forward.....

I'm a ghost





Yo a lil shit a nigga be writing all alone analyzing the world not concerned with keep it REAL im just stating how I FEEL some niggaz crying 4 shoes some peepz dont even have a MEAL!

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You had some nice multies in there, and the word-play was nice too, the whole piece had good flow and the emotion was put across well in your lyrix, very nice piece.........

damn dis whole shit wuz sick.Ya had tha multis,vocab,metties.I bet u spit dis real nice ova sum beat.Flow wuz consistent,didnt fall off or nethang like sum otha ppl's sh!t.Im givin Homez all tha credit & uppin dis 4 ya.Stay ^
-Avi

dRAGON N AV1 THNX FOR THE PROPS YO I APRECIATE IT....FINALLY SOME PEOPLE AINT SLEEPING ON RB....SHIT

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yo this was tight really liked the concept and had great flow towards it straight up this was sik i liked it holla bak 1

X as ussual thanks for the PRops homey..na'mean.....Unlike some hatersssss around here someone who apreciate yo work......WUN

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yo this shit was hot you hit it from all angles multis, mets, and vocab very strong piece and i hope to see some more of shit like this. PEEP MY 9-11 JOINT AND REPLY
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