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04-03-03, 08:37 PM | #1 | |||||||
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~WHo CARES~(people imputents)
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yo i see everybody up in here expectin feedbacks and care about what people think about them or they aint confident enough na'mean......but like i said who cared let it out it doesnt have to perfect shit humans aint perfect....anywayz peep
I wish that everyone could read between the lines You could post 100 times, and still get no replies Keep your pride, walk with your head held high Only time will tell the truth between the lies If you write for other minds, it's guaranteed you'll resign Or redesign your rhymes to climb Up the Rapbattle board, ladder of success, don't stress over text Make sure you balance writtens with real express from the reality tests Appreciate good feedback, to earn respect, give respect Don't neglect eclectic sources of superb word play Hunger for Knowledge, and be careful about what you say Manifest word play everyday without delay Remember your just a voice, but simply avoid overused cliches and similies Always be yourself, and value your own identity Write relentlessly, placing emphasis on placement Develop some tough skin, and always stay patient and I am OUT..................
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04-03-03, 08:50 PM | #2 | |||||||
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That was tight
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04-03-03, 09:36 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Thnx MAN....UPPUN
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04-04-03, 01:46 PM | #4 | ||||||
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it was aight man... I like what u saying here man... I like your honesty...
Yo man, like I said, this is aight... had decent flow, rhymes and vocab... the concept stood out though.... -1- |
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04-04-03, 04:52 PM | #5 | |||||||
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AIGHT THNX G
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04-04-03, 11:25 PM | #6 | |||||||
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UPPUN
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04-04-03, 11:39 PM | #7 | ||||||
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This was cool i dig it nice job duke..
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04-05-03, 01:56 PM | #8 | |||||||
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THNX...and what tha fuck is DUke..lol
UPPUN
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04-05-03, 02:02 PM | #9 | ||||||
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nice shit fam........original peice and u actually statin sumthin in it.... hope peeps that bitch and moan when i dont like there peices see this and realize that if i dont like it who gives a fuck... im one man on a muthafuckin web site
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04-11-03, 03:50 PM | #10 | |||||||
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LOOOOOO MICDAREALL........yea dawg u feel me.....is not like u getting a grammy for this damn shit.....so really WHo CARES...lol
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