I've not freestyled ever, so I'm wondering if I should try or just sit down and write my lyrics.


I'll cut you into 50 peices, and send you to every state.//
You don't get the girls, so go home and masturbate.//
It's my fate to walk around and make the ground shake//
To strike terror and fill every nigga's heart with hate//
Go ahead, fuck around with me one more time//
See if you won't end up on the channel news at nine//
You say you're known for your two peice//
But I'm the only one who can squeeze any trigger and plague someone like a disease//
Look at you, you're fat, you're wack//
You say you go to the gym, but your arms still look like a baseball bat//

I'm pretty young and new to the game so.. be gentle.

that was okay it wasnt bad or good

Here's a link to a recent battle.. am I good?

http://www.jackin4beats.com/j4bforu...pic.php?t=19905

I refer to rats a lot because the guy I'm battling is named "mouse_gizmo"

so the top wasnt a free style cause it said the same thing as ur battle