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04-23-03, 12:55 AM | #16 | |||||||||
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below me says:
Klavin White David Harding below me says: recognize those names? "in case you dont remember me i'll take your mind fo a lap around the blocc to jogg ya m3mory" says: david harding "in case you dont remember me i'll take your mind fo a lap around the blocc to jogg ya m3mory" says: not the other tho Interesting... Im out... peace.. ummm.. pussy
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04-23-03, 01:01 AM | #17 | ||||||
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yea.....i don't get what u just said but whateva goodnight sleep tight..........
PEACE...ummmmmmmm.......pussy |
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04-23-03, 03:25 AM | #18 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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^^^haha, Beef, yo shit was pretty funny, in a lyrical sense, the hook was wack but the verses were aiight fo a diss... Hit ma shit up...
Peace Out Yo!!!!
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04-23-03, 02:25 PM | #19 | ||||||
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Thanks its not really beef as much as boredem but if he spits something back then i guess it is but not really just wastin' time yo i hit ya shit back up man........
Still uppin...will return the favor........... PEACE |
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04-23-03, 04:36 PM | #20 | ||||||
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listenin.....
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like the beat...lyrics was straight, flow was ok...got better as u went on some punches was kinda weak....like ya flow ...hook played alot, flipped some tight lines tho fa sho....i think maybe u jus was strugglin to put the lines n the beat but if it was more memoried uda had it down....one of the better audios i've heard lately tho,
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04-23-03, 04:42 PM | #21 | ||||||
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Thanks for the feedback.much appreciated.......uppin........drop links return favor.........
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04-23-03, 07:09 PM | #22 | ||||||||||
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Not saying this was horrible, cuz the lyrics were sti8.. but wtf have you been listening too?
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04-23-03, 07:18 PM | #23 | ||||||
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iiiight...man you critique tell me what you think as if it wasn't a diss towards you but just a normal track you listenin' to honest ans seriously put down what you think and that can help me elevate ya know............
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04-23-03, 07:28 PM | #24 | |||||||||
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Beat = pretty ill.. You started spitting at a random spot on the
beat, you need to drop at the begining of the sample. Flow was weak in my opinion, it took away from you lyrics ALOT. Lyrics were 1/3 ILL... 1/3 MEDIOCRE... 1/3 RANDOMLY WACK. Hook was extremely gay, and some of the points you made were retarded. Quality obviously sucked, but I think you said something about broken mic or something. "Im so concise on a dyke" <<what? The way you used my location, and the surroundings around me was ill!!! I never would have expected 'sutter creek' and 'clinton road' in a diss against me. Props on that... Im tired so Im about done.. But I will respond Cise
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04-23-03, 07:29 PM | #25 | |||||||||
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Lyrics = your definate strong point.. work on structure though..
Cise
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04-23-03, 07:41 PM | #26 | ||||||
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Thanks............i'll look forward to your response..........
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04-24-03, 08:08 PM | #27 | ||||||
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My critique is what concise posted. really work on that.
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