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04-25-03, 11:15 AM | #1 | ||||||
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::::*~Brainz Blown~*::::
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~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ :::Ears ringing, rumors lingering, saying BaKCardii's a bastard, born to faces switched with satan, seeing things cause I'm plastered~~~ mixed with-in, the blood with-sin, adrenaline seepin through skin, my brains blown to the fact that the devils me friend~~~ catastrophies on my thoughts when they rain in my head, and you think you see tears?, nah that's the rage that I shed~~~ I cant absorb to the fact I'm chewed and swallowed by fright, my visions blurred to the signs voices louder at night~~~ :::An Elm street inside my mind but no freddy's not here, a temporary storage organ for my feelings an fears~~~ things propelled from my lips would leave you silent like lambs giving me another reason to get a mental exam~~~ dont get it wrong I'm not crazy i just look at shyt different fuck the world and what it's worth cause mine is torn and demented~~~ seen stampeding in the darkness, trying to get out quick before my mind freezes time and invites me on trips~~~ but no one can hear me scream not even the 13th ghost saying I'm a lost cause and uh, welcome to the colt~~~ :::But see my souls gone and my brain is distorted must have been that shot of guilt and that anger I snorted~~~ cant understand that when i think my thoughts is nearly contagious and when I speak many people cackle Jesus just save her~~~ used to wish of slit-wrists and mis-fits in dark spaces, now I wish of pure's kiss in dim lights with mime faces~~~ but like it says it's just a wish and me, I'm gutter grown, but when I wake up from the daze, dont matter my brainz blown~~~ ....... |
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04-25-03, 11:16 AM | #2 | ||||||
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uh I out a lot of emotion into this one so read it
and do whatcha do' *~Holler~* |
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04-25-03, 11:18 AM | #3 | |||||||
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This was ill
feelin ya style mami.. no doubt peace -1- |
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04-25-03, 03:52 PM | #4 | ||||||
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this wuz a ill drop homie.I could tell u put sum real feelin in2 it,jus let ya emotions takeova.Thats wut made it good,u kno.Stay ^
-Avi |
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04-25-03, 05:10 PM | #5 | |||||||
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tight ass drop dawg , i was feelin it
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04-26-03, 06:02 AM | #6 | |||||||
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hey ma , very deep post
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04-28-03, 09:30 AM | #7 | ||||||
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thanx to all who replied....
^^^^ ^^^ ^^ ^ |
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04-29-03, 11:28 AM | #8 | ||||||
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uppin
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04-29-03, 02:09 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Very tight rhyme , i like yo style
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05-01-03, 11:09 AM | #10 | ||||||
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thnx uppin
dyum ya'lldont sleep it's not go jump off the page and bite ya!!! |
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05-02-03, 09:10 AM | #11 | ||||||
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What's up ma? Nice post, the wordplay was ill as hell... you stay on top of yo shit. Always got the nice rhymes... uppin' this joint.
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05-02-03, 09:12 AM | #12 | ||||||
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as expected nena me encanta
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05-05-03, 11:34 AM | #13 | ||||||
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gracias senor'
uppin!! |
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