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Old 05-03-03, 08:56 AM   #1
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"Destroying My Sins"

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"Destroying My Sins"
Cant get rid of the suicidal thoughts in my HEAD/
Sometimes I wish I was innocent "Born DEAD/
I have homocidal thoughts of killing every sin I have SPIRATUALLY/
Have to revise my plans, because that would mean killing ME/
Sinning all started with Adam and EVE/
Lord pour down your baptizm, cleansing I need to RECIEVE/
This pain I feel couldn't be cured by a tylenol or an ALEIVE/
The whole world is transforming into a Vice CITY/
Trying to stay away, but peer pressure is surrounding ME/
Trapped by the invisible pressure bars and I cant break OUT/
I take a look at the stars and seek a high POWER/
Searching for an answer fror the destruction of the Twin TOWERS/
I pray that only sins go to hell and that the flame isn't getting HIGHER/
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Old 05-03-03, 09:23 AM   #2
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Old 05-03-03, 09:49 AM   #3
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Old 05-03-03, 10:13 AM   #4
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decent shit dawg,
"Have to revise my plans, because that would mean killing ME/
Sinning all started with Adam and EVE/
Lord pour down your baptizm, cleansing I need to RECIEVE/"
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Old 05-03-03, 10:16 AM   #5
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thnx for the response man
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Old 05-05-03, 06:28 PM   #7
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Old 05-26-03, 11:18 AM   #9
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Raw...

..it was raw with a real personal feel to it...though i felt some of it was a bit too 'worked' and 'elaborate'...i don't think that effected the overall piece for what it was...

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