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Self Defence

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Ain't This A Bitch.....Against My Boy?!!........Damn.....It's All Good...
I Haven't Did A Topical In Awhile...So....We'll See What Happens...
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yeah.....dam
anyway....this is the chek in
good luck man....gonna be interesting
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bit too narrow this subject but here we go....

a kiss goodbye to my girl and i was on my way
opening and closing the gate on this black night...dam it was late!
strolling along the sidewalk Rachel owned my mind
thoughts clung to her image one of a kind, pixelated visions keeping me occupied
glancing round i crossed the quiet wind swept street
all alone even my shadow seemed to retreat....straining ears was that the sound of feet?....next thing i knew i hit concrete
a solid blow to the head i was dazed but got up on one leg
blurred vision one of my eyes bled the punk aimed another hit but i dodged instead
on my feet i was ready to fight he came back at me this time with a knife
still shaken, wits were slow to ignite i dodged but he caught me inches from my life
i wouldn't let this bitch fuck up my existence!
in my mind death was something distant...reaching into my khakis trigger pulled ballistics put up my resistance

*bang bang*

two shots to his chest and all for a wallet i didnt posess
what a mess.....but all i cared about was fleeing the scene i didnt want an arrest
i looked around to see if there had been a witness -negative-
adrenaline pumping i ran with quickness....reaching home nervous sweat dripped and stomach cramped with sickness
thinking on my feet i hid the gun under the sink
went to the bath room....an eye seized up sore to blink...and my shoulder....the blade had had its drink
a rough bandage strapped my gash but i needed the hospital fast
a change of clothes later and three 9's dialed my blood levels had halved.....

*waking up my good eye blinked....i was in the D wing of the hospital
my left arm painful at the slightest movement.....i looked around and saw ill faces....but my strength was low and i sank back into the pillow.....*

*a week and a half later i am back at home....and i hear knocks at the door...*

'open up this is the LAPD....we have a warrant for your arrest'
holy shit!...i struggled to get fully dressed and opened the door with out protest
cuffed and read my rights i was to become a jail guest


*after several days discussing what the fuck was going on....my lawyer told me there had been an eye witness who saw me shoot the now deceased....and also a CCTV camera had caught me on film in the area leading to my arrest*

* unbeliavably to me i was to be charged with first degree murder....words lost themselves in my emotion and life shattered into pieces....even Rachel had turned her back on me my only real friend in the outside world....*

*we now go to the court room several months later as they reach their verdict.....*

(my lawyer...) 'Remember...Pleading guilty will mean u can get out in 8 years'
'But i'm innocent....i face my fears...u think i've wasted 23 years of life to be drowned in tears?'

*(judge) The jury have reached a verdict.....of Guilty..... how do you plead?*

*FUCK IT*

I PLEAD NOT GUILTY.....I AM INNOCENT.....I AM A MAN OF TRUTH WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED?
I WAS ATTACKED AND NEARLY KILLED.....HOW CAN U PUNISH ME?
AN INCH WAS ALL THAT SEPERATED THE BLADE FROM MY OWN LIFE
NOW I AM PUNISHED FOR IT?THATS NOT RIGHT
THE SYSTEM IS FUCKED UP.....PRISONS FULL OF MEN OF INNOCENCE
AND I WAS ONLY ACTING TO SAVE MY OWN SKIN....IT'S CALLED 'SELF DEFENCE'!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am dragged away yelling and kicking.....destined to rot in a cell
worse than hell.....ripped from Rachel that night....it was a final farewell
her sweet smell and lips still remained ....but only in memory
but i was now good as dead....trapped in a state cemetery

SELF DEFENSE

...this is the story of a physically handicapped woman under the
care of a guardian.......the woman is married but her husband has
to work mad hours in a day to pay for all the bills...........


THE ACCIDENT

holdin on to memories of her beauty and strength....layin in bed
as she silently weeps/never forgetting the day the drunken driver
too her power, health and her once peacefully sleep/a 93
Cherokee Jeep........impact and contact was head on....the steerin
wheel shattered her face/immediately paralyzed....her kidney,
lungs and spine was internally shifted all out of place/why wasn't
her life erased?.......why didn't they pull the plug when the
machine was supporting her life?/questions askin herself...........
regretting a week before she just became a newly wed wife/
infinite strife......informed all of her muscles are useless her nerves
loss abilities to sense/eternally bedridden.....feelings of unfairness
and emotions steadily runnin on tense/rid of suspense.....cuz
destiny chose its path and fate already delivered her hand/can
only pray for love and patience to overcome and strenghten her
man.........

THE GUARDIAN

time slowly passed.....medical bills at a constant rate and funds
began to deplete/supporting his wife but knowing nurturing
wouldn't keep the family on its feet/decisions complete......pained
him beyond the point of death having to depart from his Eve/gave
up on the thought that healing and rehabilitation was something
he should believe/minus the dreams to concieve......grieving no
one to carry his name but happiness in still kissing her lips/a
temporary feeling.....reality revealing its time to start stackin them
chips/Yellow Pages he flips......tears connectin wit the book while
searchin for a stay at home nurse/747-1031............20 years of
experience and wouldn't think of stealing from yallz purse/
considered a curse.......not viewed as a blessing becuz of this
unfortunate predicament/but providing the best thinkin the best
is the one wit the outstanding credentialments/explaining her
impedaments......puttin his trust in a man to look after and nurture
his baby/show her respect....pointing out she's paralyzed but
better still consider her a lady/time took away the maybe's......
continous services the husband began to see him as fam/but
even the Lord spoke in the Bible to never trust a man............

THE SITUATION

released early from work husband lookin forward to sit by her
side/look in her eyes......askin God to forgive him for wishin she
died/in only him he confides.......revealin his pain and expressin
his hurt/but wasn't ready gettin home finding his wife missing her
shirt/passin the point of hurt......watchin the guardian rape his
wife from the back/she couldn't make a sound when he began to
finger her crack/SMACK!!!.......he slapped her in the face and
laughed like a villian/the husband grabbed a knife and proceeded
wit a killin/Lord Willin......no longer feelin spiritual as betrayal
quickly took its place/stabbed continously......to the point the
police couldn't recognize his face.......

THE VERDICT

the meaning of marriage.......when a man and a woman wedlock
then the two become one/a physical spiritual merging.....like God
the Father and Jesus the Son/Since Adam and Eve it was begun..
plead innocent couldn't be blamed for at the time his emotions
was intense/since two becomes one.......he was found innocent..
acting simply in SELF DEFENSE......


*twisted version*













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I'm going with 13th on this one.
His story seemed to make a stronger impression, with more emotional involvement. Fgee's verse was good, but I felt it had too many lulls in the action. Fgee's was easier to read, however. And sometimes 13th came... I guess one could say immature, but the story was, I shudder to say it, but "deep". Thank you.

Off to read some 10-bar craptacular battles now. lol.

im gonna go with Fgee on this...i felt his vocab, story and conept a lot more...not hate on 13 that was a tight drop, but i liked fgees more....

vote=Fgee

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i think 13th better portrayed the topic at hand...
you guys are both my fam.. Reppin Regime...
But I Think 13th Came With a Better Approach..
Fgee's Was Very Nicely Put Together..
But 13ths Verse Was Put Together More Nicely..

Vote 13th

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-Sureal

yea 13th got this one
was pretty even but i thought 13th concept was better
Fgee again a very nice verse bu 13th was a lil better

Nice Battle......

Vote=13th