damn after My Last Open mic ......i got into this openmic shit more,,,,,,so peep




When sought I produce accumulated philosophies or scientific learning,
Incapable heads of knowledge feel tha burning,
Mentally, I illuminate ancient scriptures blazin analects,
Im tha wisest gift givin dismantlin ignorance dialects,
Now reflect, spiritual, metaphysical, and teleological,
I heighten ya 3rd eye perspective,
Deep insights of ya minds prospective,
Enhance my power deeper than galactic lengths,
Even a quarter of tha Bible recognize my strength,
Impregnate ya theories just to give birth to Gandhi shifts......
Shelter, Providing Residence For Mortal Existence...
While Pessimists, Manipulate Florals For Assistance...
Dress It Up as A Play Thing, But its only Providing A Service...
Even if Its just a Closed Curtain its Fulfilling its Purpose...
A Literal Object, Something to Touch, Taste and Smell...
Its where All Man will Dwell, A cave or a Cell...
Conforming To Rigorous Standards, Theres Vigorous Hand Work...
To Improve the Status of Living, I see Monotonous Plan Quirks...
In Every Home 2 Doors, And Room For Expansion...
Change The Exterior, But where you Stand Is NOTHING for Revamping...


Yo this wus Quicky................peep and critisize

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damn bretherin... tha's the most skilled shit I seen ya pop b4... you uppin' tha vocab on the real... flow was good, meta's and word play were ill... I was feelin' this 4 rill.. 1

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Damn Fam......Nice Shit...........................Ya Makin dem other Open MIcs look bad...........haha.........Keep spittin some more of dat shit man......Its lookin good....

Fo real.....
Im out......

dddaaayyyuuummmm

^^^^^^^^^LOl yea Open mics gettin easier for me now..........................thansk for the the feedback FAm..........


UPPUN

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