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Old 10-13-03, 11:01 AM   #1
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~Heavy Weight Bout~ 13th Disciple VS Taktik

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Check In Due: Wendesday 10-15-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-17-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 10-19-03 11:59 pm E.S.T

Good Luck....
 
Old 10-13-03, 12:10 PM   #2
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Old 10-13-03, 02:52 PM   #3
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in this thing...we can do this fast....doesn't matter how many
lines...i'll match u or whateva...blah blah blah.......good luck.....1
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Old 10-14-03, 11:39 PM   #4
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NO!!! I WONT ACCEPT HEAD TO JOIN BACK ON REGIME.........well......maybe

Actin' all like Paranoid Physicians...really only thinkin' he's Sick......
Peep his Curly dew...guess being Straight and Himeself dont Mix!......
I once seen you as good, but can't recognize what I seen before.......
Was pondering personals...your name's Coolie...need I say more?.......
Spoke on AIM, tried to give me advice? Mayne are you wild?......
Keep sayin' F.A.G's are dead....we all know it's homophobic denile!.....
Beatin' you slowly, so ya kids read it, tell their friends that they know me......
But we don't expect your wife to read this, she hopped up on Morphine!......
Honestly, I know your family problems and the shit you've been thru.....
But watch who you challenge, I think the Morphine's gotten to you too!........
Your accusations and wishes delirious, jus askin' to get serious......
Your custom text like girls with fucked up cycles...Paused within' Periods!......
I could sit here and point out your actual and online flaws.....
But I ask just read his old verses...Best Punch: Blah Blah Blah!!!........
He even used it in his check-in!!^^^ Gettin' older than himself yo......
I'll Stirr Up Ya Shit, kinda like Anal Sex with a Rotating Dildo!!......
Don't need much sense to confess, 13th, he knows who's better......
Wanted Ruth's cousin as online girlfriend, sad you faught Av to get her!........
So you think your RB's finest? Can't say I've listened to worse.....
Because you couldn't be Blessed Wit SkillZ if Sneezing while writing ya verse!!......

I once shot myself in the ear with a BB gun for like 5 bucks....are you that gangsta'?
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Old 10-15-03, 06:53 AM   #5
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i once shot off in ur mom and now pay u child support.......i
shoulda let u run down my leg



okay....lets do this...



I'ma disperse of this Noun........cuz in this battle Anything goes....
thinks hes at the Gateway of spittin fire.....then his comp froze.....

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*reboots*

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weak hoe, i'll even play a punch...then let u taste when i cum...
this fag is like Burger King Managers,can't think outside of the bun
bust guns, uproot this herb, i weed kill ur Field of Dreams....
think ur Royal?..i crush Crowns, smokeup and filter Kings...
clip wings,put this garbage in Glad cuz he thinks his junks nice...
splittin ur wig, so maybe next time we battle u'll think twice...
fake Obie Trice, monopolize this game and dispose of ur chance...
takes two to tango...but u ain't participating cuz i break-dance..
advert glance,blazin em mothergoose rhymes then flick u the bird
gossip'd for info till i stuck my dick in ur ear & fucked what u heard
& thats word,ur washed up....i'ma turn the tides like Whirlpool...
Tik,ur weak & ur text is less felt than braille books in Highschool...
first rule,no herbs,and thats the reason u got booted from Regime
Taktik ended up gettin slayed by the crew...and cut from the team
queer schemes,U &Bruk share IP's,hmm..cribs at a short distance..
yup..i got a Problem wit f.a.g.s., now its time to split the difference
whats this?...u ain't blessed wit gifts...so give up on (w)rappin...
you're crap...and ur verse is living proof that shit happens...
bitch slappin......twice....just for thinkin therez a chance u one
kid....ur shootin blanks...cuz 13th Disciple is jumpin the gun...


thanks for the head....oh...and ur still not in Regime

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Old 10-15-03, 08:07 AM   #6
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I wasn't too impressed with 13th verse... He had some played wordplay n some stuff was forced. Overall it was ight though. I just think Taktik had harder hittin personals, which really took the battle.

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Old 10-15-03, 05:58 PM   #7
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didn't really like 13th's verse, taktiks hit harder, was clearer to

understand and was structured better

i agree with mystery murdera that 13th used a few played ideas,

and taktic came more original, just a basically better verse,


VOTE TACTIK
 
Old 10-15-03, 06:33 PM   #8
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eh.....i personally liked my verse..... .....but good job Tik......
lets keep this going......


2-0 you
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Old 10-15-03, 10:26 PM   #9
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werd i think Tak got this also.......

he came well prepared once again.........

i dont think he wants to lose that belt......lol.....

anywayz.....i think tak got this cause......

i felt he came wit much more personals......

and some decent well punches.....that connected great.........

13th.....u came with a decent verse homie........

mad props......some connected.....some didn't.........

u just lacked on something...that i wasn't really feelin........

in ur verse...i dont knopw what it was......

it was just missing something.......but anywayz......

nice battle..but my vote goes to TAKTIK.......

yep..
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Old 10-15-03, 10:33 PM   #10
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uh
both had nice verses but tac's punches hit harder..13 had personals but not as creative as tac's.. didnt try to twist as it much..

shit i had to read it again..13 better finisher...tak played closer..13 played opener lol

personals tak was better

this bar was tight from 13 might of been overlooked..

*first rule,no herbs,and thats the reason u got booted from Regime
Taktik ended up gettin slayed by the crew...and cut from the team*

i thought it was a close battle but tac had tha personals to take it far as i know..too much played shit from 13..still nice verse though

Honestly, I know your family problems and the shit you've been thru.....
But watch who you challenge, I think the Morphine's gotten to you too!........
Your accusations and wishes delirious, jus askin' to get serious......
Your custom text like girls with fucked up cycles...Paused within' Periods!......
I could sit here and point out your actual and online flaws.....
But I ask just read his old verses...Best Punch: Blah Blah Blah!!!........
He even used it in his check-in!!^^^ Gettin' older than himself yo......
I'll Stirr Up Ya Shit, kinda like Anal Sex with a Rotating Dildo!!......
Don't need much sense to confess, 13th, he knows who's better......
Wanted Ruth's cousin as online girlfriend, sad you faught Av to get her!........
^^^^^^that did it for me

vote taktik



however..13 killed u on tha intro and outro..'shoulda let u run down my leg'..shit had me floored jus bout

good battle
 
Old 10-16-03, 05:58 AM   #11
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no doubt....no doubt.....Tik...u came wit mad personals dunny....
good job....kinda undestimated u.......no hate......i'll get another
shot at the title....hopefully u'll still be champ.... ....good job
kid...... ghost
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Old 10-16-03, 06:48 AM   #12
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Dope Battle.. Tak Didn't Use Too Much Wordplay.. But His Personals Hit Extra Hard.

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Don't need much sense to confess, 13th, he knows who's better......
Wanted Ruth's cousin as online girlfriend, sad you faught Av to get her!........


He even used it in his check-in!!^^^ Gettin' older than himself yo......
I'll Stirr Up Ya Shit, kinda like Anal Sex with a Rotating Dildo!!......

Nice^^^


13th You Came Good.. And Had Some Decent Personals. Your Wordplay Was Decent.. But Too Played. Both Of You Had Played Wordplay.. But This Battle Comes Down To Personals.. Which Tak Simply Hit Harder.

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clip wings,put this garbage in Glad cuz he thinks his junks nice...
splittin ur wig, so maybe next time we battle u'll think twice...

bitch slappin......twice....just for thinkin therez a chance u one
kid....ur shootin blanks...cuz 13th Disciple is jumpin the gun...

Good Battle But Vote- Taktik...
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Old 10-16-03, 08:04 AM   #13
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Vote Tak

13th... you know Tak got this one... nice battle though

Let me know if you both want me to keep this open
 
Old 10-16-03, 08:05 AM   #14
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Doesnt matter as its pretty lopsided................

Whatever 13th wants to do is fine
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Old 10-16-03, 02:22 PM   #15
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close this bitch.
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