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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-05-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-07-03

Voters Are To Vote On 2 Issue's:
1) Who Won The Battle
2) Should Either Of Them Be In The League

Good Luck & Drop Whole Assed....

^LoL...see you changed the message at the bottom.

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lol... didn't even know i made it... i just posted another link 2 get in....

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Apologize for quality...term paper week.

AK's? nah, HP's the only time he's reloaded a cartridge
You spit like trashy old folks, and I've senior garbage
You've met your demise. Hi, the name's Lethargic, whore
Put guitars to your lyrics and leave a rift in your vocal chords
Anally gored, kid admits he's assed out in confessional seats
Cuz rap's like sports, you're doin neither professionally
Testin me, and get left on respirators, take a breather
Checkin's true, I couldn't believe you made it in either
Decapitate him, just to leave him a head of the game
This beatin's the reason he can't remember his name
It's like the song you're name came from, his verse's trite
And if your sig's relevant than I should be braggin right?

Sorry...didn't have much time to spend on this. Good luck HMNI

Our rec. resembles, N' that's as far as Lethargic goes
Ya wins aren't respected, When all were no shows
You just got here last month and postin up a storm
Freepostin Prick! I'm suprised ya not related to Thorn
When shit gets rough, Lethargic applies the anal lube
He's tried so hard to be accepted...there's noneleft in the tube
Lethargic blows, So I'll abreviate ya name with an L
L your an herb, That WL in ya sig stands fo Win-Less spell
Ya screwed now, I'ma smack n' nail ya words...
Then drill it thru ya head bitch...L you have no curves!
Knowledge is power...It's time L gets a notice
L flexes his text?...Well his visions is in n' outta focus
I could claim a biter...But leave L's verse as played
N' by the looks of it...You did a bad job of it mayne!
Everyone got room fo improvement...L just has a lot
20 lines max, so i punched my 1st few thought thru ya inbox!(seriously)
I respect how you walk away as a good sportsman
Not everyone takes a loss easy...n u made it a profession
I thru the max, a complete game cuz he's no competition
Cuz the best part of his verse was the spaces inbetween it

Lethargic takes this...

Better and less played punches...

A majority of Hi's versee was garbage...
A few decent lines here and there...
But not near enough...

Vote Lethargic
And vote Lethargic in

Lethargic surprised me here, he came with a decent verse
I wish I could say the same for Hi My Name Is
Lethargic takes the battle with better wordplay and punches
Hi My Name is! limit your self to one W/L punches at the absolute most, lmao

Vote - Lethargic
In - Lethargic

lethargic def won this better punches altogether and hit harder
other kid came alright but seemed a bit of a mess

leth came personal and some nice word play..bla
leth in..

vote. lethargic in .

lethargic wins
and
lethargic in
but
other kat
no
other kat
losses
sorry guys
i
got bored
readin
this battle

vote - lethargic

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S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

lethargic
AK's? nah, HP's the only time he's reloaded a cartridge
You spit like trashy old folks, and I've senior garbage
^^^aiight, but needs to be stroger for an opener 5/10^^^

You've met your demise. Hi, the name's Lethargic, whore
Put guitars to your lyrics and leave a rift in your vocal chords
^^^aiight 6/10^^^

Anally gored, kid admits he's assed out in confessional seats
Cuz rap's like sports, you're doin neither professionally
^^^lol, nice wordplay 7/10^^^

Testin me, and get left on respirators, take a breather
Checkin's true, I couldn't believe you made it in either
^^^nice first line 7/10^^^

Decapitate him, just to leave him a head of the game
This beatin's the reason he can't remember his name
^^^lol 7/10^^^

It's like the song you're name came from, his verse's trite
And if your sig's relevant than I should be braggin right?
^^^nice finisher, 8/10^^^

nice drop, i thought u started off weak, then came harder with each punch.

hi my name is
Our rec. resembles, N' that's as far as Lethargic goes
Ya wins aren't respected, When all were no shows
^^^aight, need to come harder with opener 6/10^^^

You just got here last month and postin up a storm
Freepostin Prick! I'm suprised ya not related to Thorn
^^^nice, but simple wordplay 6/10^^^

When shit gets rough, Lethargic applies the anal lube
He's tried so hard to be accepted...there's noneleft in the tube
^^^gay jokes played 4/10^^^

Lethargic blows, So I'll abreviate ya name with an L
L your an herb, That WL in ya sig stands fo Win-Less spell
^^^crappy wordplay agenn 5/10^^^

Ya screwed now, I'ma smack n' nail ya words...
Then drill it thru ya head bitch...L you have no curves
^^^wack 5/10^^^

Knowledge is power...It's time L gets a notice
L flexes his text?...Well his visions is in n' outta focus
^^^ nice 6/10^^^

I could claim a biter...But leave L's verse as played
N' by the looks of it...You did a bad job of it mayne!
^^^nope 4/10^^^

Everyone got room fo improvement...L just has a lot
20 lines max, so i punched my 1st few thought thru ya inbox!(seriously)
^^^not too bad 6/10^^^

I respect how you walk away as a good sportsman
Not everyone takes a loss easy...n u made it a profession
^^^aiight 5/10^^^

I thru the max, a complete game cuz he's no competition
Cuz the best part of his verse was the spaces inbetween it
^^^shitty wordplay 4/10^^

you need to work on ya worplay, an u got a few played subjects



vote:lethargic
case of quality not quantity, an lethargics verse was a lot iller


aiight
peace

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sorry for the freepost but


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