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Good Luck & Give A Fuck....

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Oompa Loompa Doop-Ity-Dee...watch as I rip fgee

In this battle for the title, fgee's verse is straight worthless....
Cuz the only Hot Match he holds...is struck on a ruff surface!...
And I declare, after fgee losses, jus dont let him reinstate....
You gotta forget being between greatness...and stick with E and H!.....
I admit you've proven yourself...to be wack, so stop it now....
& you got the reader's raising hands...tryin' to hold the vomit down!...
So this oompa loompa sugars up his shit, digested it tasty...
'Volve said Give A Fuck^...not meaning get naked and chase me!....
We've seen it before, holla at Regime to vote n' come at me.....
But we know why you in 'Light'-weight....completely Phat Free!....

Oompa Loompa Doop-Ity-Doo...fgee is wack, hope he takes the clue

its hard to be off the wall...when your concepts r all wack
a stationary targets easy to handle..ur under my thumb..tak!
I wont beat my self up about this match..its just not fair
Pack it in….Cos I compare battling 'Tik…..to a game of solitaire
Its not about U's it's all about I's…..i skool this pupil of despair
Told him watch his step...and he tripped down my stare!
Taktiks leading the warlords no where….all Regimes rejects fostered
And he somehow forgot…..to put himself on the femcee roster
Don't kling on to hope get a doctor...u're featuring as an ugly martyr
Taktiks the cosmetic surgery advert……before the after!
ur the starter posting before me.......Taktik knows he's broke
Jumped to conclusions leap-frogged me...and simply.....croaked!

This was an aight battle ... Tak's 1st and last lines were aight ... Made me laugh at first ... But they really weren't needed ... Both came wit some pretty decent verses ... Nice punches and wordplay from both ...

Really the battle came to a decision between these two lines ...

Tak:
So this oompa loompa sugars up his shit, digested it tasty...
'Volve said Give A Fuck^...not meaning get naked and chase me!....

fgee:
Taktiks leading the warlords no where….all Regimes rejects fostered
And he somehow forgot…..to put himself on the femcee roster

And i went back and forth about who to vote on ... And in the end ... Imma have to give it to fgee ... Cuz not only was his shit funny ... But the Regime rejects part was so true ... LoL ... Props to both of ya'll tho ... Peace

Vote : fgee

Nice Battle Here...Both Came Nice..

I Think Taktik Took This However...He Had The More Consistant Verse...Where As Fgee Had A Nice Line, Then Fell Back A Bit Then Had Another Nice Line...Both Had Nice Wordplay And Flow...Tough Battle To Call..

Vote - Taktik

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I admit you've proven yourself...to be wack, so stop it now....
& you got the reader's raising hands...tryin' to hold the vomit down!...

^that line was funny. Gotta give that to you.

Anyway, good battle from both. I was expecting a little better to be honest. The way taktik dropped the past two weeks to the way he dropped in this battle...seems like he didn't come half as hard. However, he did have a couple really nice punches in there. The closer was a little weaker than desired, but a good verse. Fgee's verse was lacking in a lot of spots and then had high points in others. Inconsistent though. Some punches were hard hitting others were weaker. Not a bad verse, just wasn't consistent. Both had punches, but Tak's had more consistency. Good battle guys..

Vote ~ Taktik.

eh...i hate voting on battles that my boys are in....but..again i
have to come real....



this was completely a battle based on punches and wordplay...
not too many personals....matter of fact i don't believe there
was none at all.....so i read this a couple of times back and forth..
and Fgee....u had good wordplay...but some of ur punches were
really cheesy...

I wont beat my self up about this match..its just not fair
Pack it in….Cos I compare battling 'Tik…..to a game of solitaire

^this doesn't rhyme.... (Sol-I-Tair-E)...thats how its said...

ur the starter posting before me.......Taktik knows he's broke
Jumped to conclusions leap-frogged me...and simply.....croaked!

^that finisher didn't do anything for me at all...i actually felt like
playing that game Frogger....but....


Taktik....u had some pretty good wordplay/punches in there also..
there was only one line i seen as kinda lame....but worked....

So this oompa loompa sugars up his shit, digested it tasty...
'Volve said Give A Fuck^...not meaning get naked and chase me!....

that was kinda on a gay level....but eh...


so...this is basically the bottomline....



Taktik came wit better wordplay and harder punches....good
battle and all...but



vote=Tik

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In this battle for the title, fgee's verse is straight worthless....
Cuz the only Hot Match he holds...is struck on a ruff surface!...
9/10.........dopeness
And I declare, after fgee losses, jus dont let him reinstate....
You gotta forget being between greatness...and stick with E and H!.....
6/10........clever, but it didn't hit that hard
I admit you've proven yourself...to be wack, so stop it now....
& you got the reader's raising hands...tryin' to hold the vomit down!...
9/10....haha, nice
So this oompa loompa sugars up his shit, digested it tasty...
'Volve said Give A Fuck^...not meaning get naked and chase me!....
9/10....lol, dope
We've seen it before, holla at Regime to vote n' come at me.....
But we know why you in 'Light'-weight....completely Phat Free!....
5/10.....played as fuck

Tak=38/50=76%

fgee's verse
its hard to be off the wall...when your concepts r all wack
a stationary targets easy to handle..ur under my thumb..tak!
10/10.......haha, dope
I wont beat my self up about this match..its just not fair
Pack it in….Cos I compare battling 'Tik…..to a game of solitaire
7/10....good
Its not about U's it's all about I's…..i skool this pupil of despair
Told him watch his step...and he tripped down my stare!
9/10.....dope wordplay
Taktiks leading the warlords no where….all Regimes rejects fostered
And he somehow forgot…..to put himself on the femcee roster
7/10.......lol, good
Don't kling on to hope get a doctor...u're featuring as an ugly martyr
Taktiks the cosmetic surgery advert……before the after!
5/10.....blah
ur the starter posting before me.......Taktik knows he's broke
Jumped to conclusions leap-frogged me...and simply.....croaked!
6/10......weak finisher

fgee=44/60=73.33%

This was close as fuck and I give big props to both
It was so tight that I had to take it to the math, and
Tak took it in my book by 2.67%
dope shit from both

Vote - Tak

Both came well but I think Taktik was more consistent.
Thus, and not to slight Fgees verse, which was witty…

My vote - taktik

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taktik dropped better, fgee's wasn't that bad either.. just not enough to beat tak's verse



In this battle for the title, fgee's verse is straight worthless....
Cuz the only Hot Match he holds...is struck on a ruff surface!...
^^dopness, killed it with the first bar

Vote Taktik

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