This was clearly Dez's win.

Great imagery, great story, great twist there at the end.

The only thing I'd bitch about was ya flow...

Just felt it wasn;t there at times, had ta backtrack and re-read in a few spots...

But, the vocab, the wordplay, the metas ("eyepatch", "tables", and "food" lines were tight) belonged to Dez.

Narc, sorry...

Just didn't feel ya verse from the beginning.
Too gang banger, too thug, too selfish of a story.
I mean, bullets are flying through ya window...
And you're not concerned about ya wife getting hit, ya concerned about YOU getting hit and leaving her a widow.
WTF?

Very simple, vocab was elementary, flow was ok, but the content and the story could have been so much better.

Dez

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everything left to do is done, not a fucking thing left out not one..

Dez Ripped It... I Was Feelin All Of It. You Came In Depth Unlike Mic King.. And The Whole Tupac Theme Of His Verse Didn't Catch My Attention. Dez Had A Nice Rhyme Scheme And Everything Was Seemingly On Point.

Vote Dez.

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