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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03


Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!

Fook, all these aliases *sigh*. Too scared to check in under their real names.

I'm G. Hod aka LyricALI aka Quality aka Atta aka Avah Noo aka C. Gull aka Koalatee . . Good 'nough? You can make half a verse of name punches already.

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Forever I'm suitable - new members only endeavor to rue the bull
Now, somebody tell this kid the War-Lords were never reputable
I murder devouts, kid - so lose beliefs and return to the fountains
of garbage; where monotony drones like public service announcements
I won't be reckoned with; bring your weak, atoned defensive bid
Verdict: K. wins; without an obese teen to condone or second it
Damn the facts, stand up - as I expand to crack banned hubs
Iller than ill? Surely, Dude must represent the Camarac fan club
Now, score . . It's your girl's lucky day 'cos I roast, pit & corral whores
You are lethargic; 'less your verses are ghost written by Al Gore
Deplored sonnets breed off this excuse who runs w/ four labotomies
No matter how many you get, quantity never comes before Koalatee
Dissolve, hell, I came tight; Dropped bomb-shells that gave light . .
To tattooing "Quality" on his head. . if Evolve spelt my name right
Broken flow in the last line; Kiss your mother, & then demand my pants
& give you Christopher Reeve's number. . or did you want a standing chance?

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WP Stands united, upper-echelon writers..damn, what's next?
Fuck newbie I-net thugs, these kids are soldiers!....in text
But this militant's blessed, to be in that Writer's Corps.
Till I dropped bombs on Muslims...and ended this Holy War
It's G. Hod! yeah dawg! You are known!...for writin the mag
Don't make me laugh..
Cuz K's just another Seraphe and Cam probly wrote half of that
Fuckin Fag..
Multi-aliases get their personalities split, you know what I'm talkin about
Talkin shit with a glock cocked in his jaws spit and I'm poppin off at the mouth
Scoff at this bout, they're handin me bitches and callin em competition
Mockin him out, no intentions for a KO to save him from this derision
Listen, I'll beat down Ali, run through Avah Noo's and shoot down C. Gull's
YOU may need half a verse, but my one punch took out all those people^
Get thrown from the top of the steeple, to the pews and land in grace
I'll destroy your rep...self-respect, appearance, and image till your losin face
You stupid fake, Fuck this slut...you've never come dope at any time
And you're on Cam's nut so much...he made an alias called Bear-in Mynd

Vote Lethargic

Koalatee you came pretty nice as usual... but i think Leth's punches were more witty.... especially the last one... that had me
chuckling... nice battle


You stupid fake, Fuck this slut...you've never come dope at any time
And you're on Cam's nut so much...he made an alias called Bear-in Mynd

Damn...
Lethargic takes this...

Good battle but lethargic came nicer...
Period

word...Leth got this with better punches and personals....here's what killed it...

^^that was nice

Overall : u both had equal structures and vocab....Koala had a slightly better flow....but Leth got this mostly from punches and personals...nice shit from u both though...good read....no hate...just a vote...

Vote - Lethargic

peace
4:20

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Lmao .. was a pretty nice battle actually, and im not on anyones dick, im cool with you both so .. the breakdown, ouit of 5's:

G.Hod

Forever I'm suitable - new members only endeavor to rue the bull
Now, somebody tell this kid the War-Lords were never reputable
heh, not bad, multi seemed forced but personal was ok .. 3
I murder devouts, kid - so lose beliefs and return to the fountains
of garbage; where monotony drones like public service
announcements
ehhhh, didnt really hit to hard IMO .. 2
I won't be reckoned with; bring your weak, atoned defensive bid
Verdict: K. wins; without an obese teen to condone or second it
again, set up was ok but actual punch wasnt too hard .. 2
Damn the facts, stand up - as I expand to crack banned hubs
Iller than ill? Surely, Dude must represent the Camarac fan club
lmao .. i liked .. 3
Now, score . . It's your girl's lucky day 'cos I roast, pit & corral whores
You are lethargic; 'less your verses are ghost written by Al Gore
ok name diss .. 2
Deplored sonnets breed off this excuse who runs w/ four labotomies
No matter how many you get, quantity never comes before Koalatee
nice way to flip the punch so he cant use it .. 2
Dissolve, hell, I came tight; Dropped bomb-shells that gave light . .
To tattooing "Quality" on his head. . if Evolve spelt my name right
lmao - seemed more aimed at Volve's spellin .. 2
Broken flow in the last line; Kiss your mother, & then demand my pants
& give you Christopher Reeve's number. . or did you want a standing chance?
nah .. chris reeves / styanding lines are gay, you gave it an ok twist but i didnt like it much .. 2

Overall: 18

Lethargic


WP Stands united, upper-echelon writers..damn, what's next?
Fuck newbie I-net thugs, these kids are soldiers!....in text
heh, should of worded it better .. 2
But this militant's blessed, to be in that Writer's Corps.
Till I dropped bombs on Muslims...and ended this Holy War
wasnt feeling much .. 2
It's G. Hod! yeah dawg! You are known!...for writin the mag
Don't make me laugh..
Cuz K's just another Seraphe and Cam probly wrote half of that
Fuckin Fag..
lmao .. was nice, decent personal .. 3
Multi-aliases get their personalities split, you know what I'm talkin about
Talkin shit with a glock cocked in his jaws spit and I'm poppin off at the mouth
no no no .. that concepts old .. 2
Scoff at this bout, they're handin me bitches and callin em competition
Mockin him out, no intentions for a KO to save him from this derision
again, needed better wording .. 2
Listen, I'll beat down Ali, run through Avah Noo's and shoot down C. Gull's
YOU may need half a verse, but my one punch took out all those people^
lol .. nice, flipped it good .. 3
Get thrown from the top of the steeple, to the pews and land in grace
I'll destroy your rep...self-respect, appearance, and image till your losin face
again, decent line .. RM style punch .. 3
You stupid fake, Fuck this slut...you've never come dope at any time
And you're on Cam's nut so much...he made an alias called Bear-in Mynd
not a bad finish, could of used better wording but it was ok .. 2

Overall : 19

fuck, not a battle battle, pretty even but the overall totals have spoken and ive got Leth taking it by a fucking edge of 1.. damn ..

Vote - lethargic

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Both came good
G. Hod came with a pretty nice verse but had sum played material (christophe reeve punches? Why!)
Lethargic really outshone the hod in wordplay and punches

"Listen, I'll beat down Ali, run through Avah Noo's and shoot down C. Gull's
YOU may need half a verse, but my one punch took out all those people^
Get thrown from the top of the steeple, to the pews and land in grace
I'll destroy your rep...self-respect, appearance, and image till your losin face
You stupid fake, Fuck this slut...you've never come dope at any time
And you're on Cam's nut so much...he made an alias called Bear-in Mynd"
^those last 3 bars were especially dope and made it clear in my mind that I should.......

Vote - Lethargic

Disheartening @ the least . . Good writing, kid.

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Thanks, great verse. Extremely close battle...good shit.

Eh, forgot to congratulate you. You're the first person I've battled on RB that I had to spend more than 10-15 minutes on for a verse. Except for Eye Witness, but that's cuz I was typing a paper at the same time

vote- lethargic...

I said 2 weeks ago in the mag you were a threat... I'd say I pick'em right... crazy elevation, fam. This battle was good. Obviously lethargic edged it out.

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