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12-18-03, 04:57 PM
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[Wk8] rule (2-0) vs Razah Skrybe (2-0)
IP: A9A7 727D
Verses Due: December 26th
Voting Ends: December 30th Topic: Oh Come All Ye Faithful Have fun.
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12-18-03, 08:21 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
checkin in....i'll put my verse up soon
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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12-21-03, 11:34 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
not to sure this is overly good...but we'll see what happens
Oh Come Ye All Faithful Holly matrimony a wise angel birthed at a signifacant time A blessed child whoms father is stabalized in the blue sky In the town of bethleham were people journy to reconise The importance of this babies humble, but deny the crys The baby born in front of three wise men with treasures To help support the path of the baby and its pleasures As the moment severs, an time seems to stand still.. Grows into a man named jeezus..whos life is unfilled Supports the needy children graciously provokes love Teaches people to pray become loyal believe in up above Past unremembered it wasn't important to this creature To fix the present grow people like grass in the future To all work together but this seems to have no faith The people go wild hate in his preaches of the great He tryed to save the world from its evil undiscovered People shut there eyes denied to heal one another So as hell grew on land exscaped from soils core Demons we're raging hestaricaly like a wild bore Greed turned into a desire that people craved deeply Jeesus tried to react but the wound of life opened quickly He said a passage from his mind.......... 'Those who are evil blessed may not reach the kingdom of heavon' Act as a god, be truthful to one another I bekon. Instead of listening they tied the lords child to a cross.. Came to a state of mind that all was soon tobe lost Heard he was in this to create a huge disaster.. But he created nothing but love an what truly mattered As he died slow and the gods denied his time to go.. He opened to grow reincarnated for the evil so.. He trapped his mind in a state of certin beliefs Strict to the oppente of hate and certian griefs Walked apon water to show angel benifits But to the human eye the glasses didn't fit So they resumed in there honor and destroyed the honor That was never legable for a human to walk on water.. So they killed the holly man who put fire in the church Whos smile bloomed and was an angel sence birth Over centeries we have become less greatful X-mas gifts, wars, and envy..lets help one another... Please...think about life..come all you faithful... Help our babies..woman and lonely brothers.. Think about the one gift we never reconise... Our life to help..but it seems paralized... Time sits awaiting the moment of hormany.. Lets play together...create a love symphany...
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 Last edited by rule : 12-21-03 at 07:27 PM. |
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12-27-03, 01:22 AM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 452C 76C4
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Rule Wins |
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