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A lil bit of self hype, a lil bit of talkin shit..

Flow is back

Hop off me


Check it.....

Yall aint never gonna beat me... Plus yall soft and wack
Yall cats is nuthin... Thats why i brush you off like plaque
Just sit back, and if an ill rhyme is made, dont sweat it
Cuz like an out of order arcade game, you wont get credit
It's pathetic, and most of you cant match what my pen holds
It's like giving 11 emcee's deals, just to watch ten fold
not drunk, just high, yall dont know what sweating brings
So instead, i stay around joints kinda like wedding rings
Plus i dont ever mix words, or give you anything to dispute
I just 'cut to the chase' like CNN and police pursuits

*10 min break for smoke session*

Yall know im heading for success faster than nascar speed
Plus its true... my styles 'off the chain' like 'lost car keys'
There's no way u can break down, ya motor aint even startin
Yall the type to buy a 'sale'-boat and think you got a bargain
And while i be puttin in overtime.. Yall be on that sudden shit
Thats why my clever material is like 4 + 4, you only get 'sum' of it
The two words to describe me... would be talent and respect
So fuckin with me, will put ya 'life in jeopardy' like 'Alex Trebec'
Yall about to be 'take'n-a-part'.... Similar to 'hungry actors'
Then i'll snap ya neck, like you was doing the bungee backwards

Have you strugglin for breath, tuggin between life and death
They say nobody has the answers, but im the type to guess
So fuck ya wealth, cuz you really dont wanna test my skill
Plus yall 'paper aint long' yall just tryin to 'stretch ya bills'

So if you think you can beat me, step up to the challenge
Cuz you wannabe vets..will end up tossed like fruit salad


Fuck it im done

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

yo I really liked this shit, man. Good ass flow like whoa, nigga!!! and the lines were str8t fiya nigga. "Brush you off like plaque" lmao... nice shit. I really was feeling it my nigga. 9/10

plz rtf in thread below my nigga. pc one.



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181257

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iight 1st thing i read an tha board an i must say im impressed...its good not ta see herbs up in this so far an im glad i read this shit...it was hot, saw tha multis an shit an tha metaphors an similies..it was tight homie keep doin wat ya doin.. pz

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Will soon b off wit my rap career....so if yall wanna rememba me...want my 'signature?'

Only part of this that wasnt dope, was your closer, and that alex trebec line... I mean... I get it... It's just not funny... Otherwise your metaphors were like nothing i have ever seen from you... That ten fold line was dope... Get at me about a collab on aim dog...

9/10.

yea i just read it again and the Alex line was forced but i had nothing to think of im a keystyle assassin now i dont waste my time writing shit i figure im better keystlin it up.. but yea no doubt for that collabo back to the old days

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

gud flow...........good mets ......good structure..........nuff sed

lol

keep it up

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