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Marshall Mathers 5 100.00%
flow verse 0 0%
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Old 07-01-05, 09:59 PM   #1
flow verse
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From: BOSTON
Marshall Mathers vs flow verse

IP: E31E 5CBB

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Old 07-01-05, 09:59 PM   #2
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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 09:59 PM.
 
Old 07-01-05, 10:04 PM   #3
flow verse
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From: BOSTON
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you must rape ur mother . . . maybe u have no father
maybe ur girl’s a slut . . . . maybe pissed cause Christina Agullia won’t give u a fuck u must have his problems cause I see no other way . . . that you would go and bite somebody’s name
Must have thought someone called you eminem. . . must be confuse they said M&M’s
Cause you yellow on the outside . . . but since you got ur jeans sagging they think ur black on the inside
cat don’t even have to responde cuz ur lines are all wack . . and like cheap booze all flat
and I feel sorry for you u must hate urself . . or u must spit like eminem just don’t go and “lose urself”
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Old 07-01-05, 10:08 PM   #4
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Marshall Mathers has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 10:08 PM.
 
Old 07-01-05, 10:11 PM   #5
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When I say you're wack, it's tru, it's no curse
And jus like your name you DO, flow worse
Man, you're so wack, I'ma make you feel defeat
Puttin' your dick on a stove, only way you "cum" wit heat
You're not dope like Rakim, man, it's all inside your head
I'll put a dick in your mouth.... and fuck what you said
 
Old 07-01-05, 10:47 PM   #6
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From: Florida
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

Marshall "Ugly-Fuckin" Mathers took this one......
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Old 07-01-05, 10:52 PM   #7
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This was feedback posted for Marshall Mathers

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Old 07-01-05, 11:09 PM   #8
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From: .Da.Bridge.
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

Marshall Mathers

When I say you're wack, it's tru, it's no curse
And jus like your name you DO, flow worse
4/10

lacked creativity so u that got a 4

Man, you're so wack, I'ma make you feel defeat
Puttin' your dick on a stove, only way you "cum" wit heat
5/10

nothin new everyone uses that line

You're not dope like Rakim, man, it's all inside your head
I'll put a dick in your mouth.... and fuck what you said
6/10

better creativity but GAY line 4real man



- i liked your verse, shit started off simple but ended much better....u had a punch, no flow, some wordplay, a meta....overall (15%)


Flow Verse

you must rape ur mother . . . maybe u have no father
maybe ur girl’s a slut . . . . maybe pissed cause Christina Agullia won’t give u a fuck u must have his problems cause I see no other way . . . that you would go and bite somebody’s name
Must have thought someone called you eminem. . . must be confuse they said M&M’s
Cause you yellow on the outside . . . but since you got ur jeans sagging they think ur black on the inside
cat don’t even have to responde cuz ur lines are all wack . . and like cheap booze all flat
and I feel sorry for you u must hate urself . . or u must spit like eminem just don’t go and “lose urself”

what the fuck do u really want me 2 say about that verse? stretched like fuck...no punches, wordplay (do u know what that means?) nothin

OVERALL VOTE= Marshall Mathers

hit that battle in my sig with a vote
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Old 07-02-05, 10:18 AM   #9
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Old 07-02-05, 11:22 AM   #10
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

Hot ass lines yo.......fo real!!!!

Definately rookie of the year!!!
 
Old 07-02-05, 11:26 AM   #11
Artemis
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

yo I ain't like you dude, but you took this shit.. We gotta get our battle up kid.
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Old 07-02-05, 12:58 PM   #12
PrahJect
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From: BedStuy
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

Yo flow...ELEVEATE DOGG...shit was aiite....first bars were whac but:

Cause you yellow on the outside . . . but since you got ur jeans sagging they think ur black on the inside
cat don’t even have to responde cuz ur lines are all wack . . and like cheap booze all flat
and I feel sorry for you u must hate urself . . or u must spit like eminem just don’t go and “lose urself”

Here on it was aiite....liked the last lien but could have been done much better....

MM....hahaha...took the piss...good punches...hit hard...made me laugh throughout

When I say you're wack, it's tru, it's no curse
And jus like your name you DO, flow worse
Man, you're so wack, I'ma make you feel defeat
Puttin' your dick on a stove, only way you "cum" wit heat

however weak endin IMO....anyways easy win..

RTF to my battle with daubs
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