Vise:

in darkness i pen the first words to the end of my chapter
scripts from the abyss of my soul unfold when my sentiments captured
plastered upon these pages, i flood discontent, my bloodstream rages
thoughts ancient as pagans racin toward idol with obscene praises
i've seen circumstance turn herbs bitter and sour the earth's sinners
enpowered jerks snicker, and leave peepz to cowar with hurt quicker
they say there 6 million ways to get slayed....
but 357. ways to get paid, the dirty way to earn a wage if your brave
turn the page of this hostle gospel i wrote in blood
scrptures of corrodes thugs, that lived by the sword, but died by the loaded gun
since the garden of eden, i seen snakes turn into harden demons
which lead to larger reasons to sin, next to kins followed so seamless
hethen's sold their soul for a pot a gold, same story, the plot is old
it was the hunger that harvest blows til the hardest fold...



Dimension:

My bodies Wounded with Scars and Blows, from tryna attack and Bombard our Foes
Dim is equipped with his Targets Close, to mar those with the hardest prose
Just sit back and T.urn T.he P.ages, cuz our Scriptiures is what's gon Earn the Wages
Most of our youth Learn with Gages, How to shoot and Burn the Nation
Hidden Secrets Still remain Untold, and its just a Pitty Son!!
Cuz i already Knew they had 'Xtraterrestrial Space Crafts' in Area 51
Life always had Strife, always Ending in Such Pain
Crushed Fame, leaves me to Rage and Just Bust Brains
Im talken to the Gods of Earth, in search to Release these Souls
Believe these Goals, cuz there more Visible then the Dead Sea Scrolls
Deep in Empty Holes, is where you'll Find a Society where Peace Exists
Ancient Myths, were told Since, Tribes Survived Around Old Cliffs......

this drop was ILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL , i'm talkin bout Mad ILLLLLLL , , , nice vocab , nice wordplay , , i liked da concept , ,tight drop dawg

... ya skillz r remakable.....u in a crew.....cause if u aint, we want u

nigga dont be askin catz to get in our crew like dis , damn u gotta ask dem in Pm or sumthin , , i think he already got a crew called T.T.P

haha...mad bad dawg ...chill,chill, aight...i was impressed so i told him we wanthim,if u dont want him then aight my bad......

lmao...nah y'all...i'm actually in a crew at the moment, called TTP....but i apreciate the offer nonetheless...good looks on the love tho


still uppin this

"Just sit back and T.urn T.he P.ages," haha that was good,
yo vise thats a nice topic to spit about darkness i've also done a piece about it, u was straight to the point in every line,

same with u dimensions ya make a good crew if u spit shit like this all the time

ILL drop, mayn...Everythin wuz there for you...Stay up...
(Refer ta Bash's reply - how i'm feelin but dis verse)

Return tha favor n gimme some feedback fo my shit:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=43958

no doubt kid^^...and thanx for the love


still uppin this y'all