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01-14-05, 07:45 PM | #1 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Flow Intelligent Vs. Cuban~Storm (HeavyWeight Championship Match)
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Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic : Staring Down A Dark Alley
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01-14-05, 09:22 PM | #2 | |||
.::I Kill For Fun::.
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checken in................................................ title is mine biatch lol g'luck
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01-14-05, 09:30 PM | #3 | |||||
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we'll see... you've no showed me 2 times before.. now im going back to my old style... got some competition here .. g'luck fam.. either way intellectual thoughts is coming out with the title
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1903777 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1903791
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01-18-05, 07:17 PM | #4 | |||||
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Colorless arrays of darkness encompass my soul And the evils' laughter is silent, but i feel it whole The alley leads to nowhere, but i've been intrigued By this black hole of nothing, that others perceive As to be, a realm to a treacherous world of misery But i dont trust opinions, i need to see it for me I step quietly on the unorganized crumbling street But the fear in my heart moves to my trembling feet Causing me to stop suddenly, and venture no more Thinking about the catacysts of problems in store This alley could lead to my death, or invigorate me But darkness is a metaphor for death figuratively I slowly pace fowards, moving quite caustiously Stop again, but leaving would be a loss for me I need to move towards this adventurous alley Forget opinions, to me they are only fallacies Falacious ideas followed by idiotic statements So i yearn to progress foward on the pavement Scattered garbage bags, open dumpsters, rats Graffiti cans, everything from boxes to gnats No signs of life or movement, silently cruising I see someone straying!! no.. just an illusion It's so confusing, i've never seen this alley before Constant silence, for this street forever more Out of the corner of my eye, i see an illuminating site It's a door, across the floor, and it's sparkling bright I move quickly, breath in strokes, until im there I go to touch the doorknob, and it dissapeared And reapeared a man of a monstrousness size With grimacing features, and atrocious eyes I backed away quickly, he was delightly resolved But the fear in my heart made me slightly apalled The man spoke gently, in a quiet whisper at most My soul is stuck in this door, but i desire to float With no way to leave, i must prespire to fight And try to escape from this most laborless life I turned and ran swiftly, frightened by his words And made it back to the quiet ends of the burbs I thought i was dead, i really came much too close And walked into an alley filled with a bunch of souls
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01-18-05, 07:21 PM | #5 | ||||
Knock out kings fur life
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dam seems like another no show flow lol but here is what I think
you had good strucutre homes you put a hell of allot of feeling in this one and most of all you had it as if I was in it myself and it got me pretty scared in my pants lmao. but yea over all it was a 8.9/10 and do not worry I had a no show myself. |
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01-18-05, 09:20 PM | #6 | |||||
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well i'll let that stay up there.. but if he drops a verse before 12:00 im deleting your post so youll have to revote honestly
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01-20-05, 11:04 PM | #7 | |||||||
Still Spectacular, Yes!
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Flow gots nice..flow..lol...nice piece...somethin that had me on the edge of my seat wantin to finish and read and shit of that nature fa sho...u did yo thing...
9.10..... werd
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