Aeight then T REX...
Same rules as posted in Btch Slppd
U spit 1st...
Ill drop later (I gotta go 2 work)
PZ

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Hey bitch, ready for this shit?
Sit right back and take a hit
Theres no way to couter this spit
So just give up and play wit your clit.
And now your at your dead end job,
Ya make no money,might as well rob.
Now hurry and go, you sucka free bitch,
All of my rhymes go off without a hitch.
Cant wait to see your shit, its gunna suck
But go on and spit, cuz i dont give a fuck.

you going to post yours now or what???
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come on ive been waiting for a day for you to post and you havent, hurry it up already
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What tha fuck R U talkin' bout... U aint been waitin' a day bitch.
I made this battle like 5 or so hours ago. I just got back from my 'dead end job'...
I'm checkin' in >>>

This kids like a rat, Im bout 2 feed'em a spit thats poisono-us/
T-Rex? heh...yeah my lil' brother bought U last week at Toys-R-Us/
U aint shit- U a piece of shit- and since the pieces fit someone should put U together/
My shits so sharp - your shits so cheesy, thats funny now were both similar to cheddar/
U cant beat me, U wont defeat me/
Im half asleep and still U make this victo-ry seem so easy/
So, why cant U eat me??? I was expectin' some sort of lyrical carnivore, emcee annihilatin' dinosaur/
I guess that vibrator left your Vagina sore/
its obvious your amateur, & U acually have the wit of a tyrannasor- Us Rex-what's next?...butt sex?...U proly never even ever touch'd breast/ as for me, my nuts strech - bangin' Indiana 2 atlanta whores/
I de smoke ya even if this was a bandana war/
Your skillz are as real as Tonya Montana was.

aeight, lets get some...
VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COMIN' IN THIS BITCH.
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PLZ VOTE ON THIS SHIT.
break vote down aleast a lil' bit...
Got Advice?- Then give it.
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t-rex had better sturcture but overall sucka had better flow,wordplay and punches.my vote goes to

Sucka\/Free


vote on this battle.........................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97818

Breakdown:

Punches: Sucka
Flow: T-Rex
Creativity: Niether (Both were played)
Vocab: Niether (Played words)
Enjoyment: Niether (Both too Elementary)
Opener: Sucka
Closer: Sucka
Personals: Sucka

Weak battle, but Sucka ya jus' have ta elevate...T Rex, ya need ta elevate...a lot. No beef, jus' givin people helpful advice...

Appreciate the advice G-1.
UPPIN' for more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!
lets get this shit voted plz.......
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Punches: Sucka
Flow: sucka (barely)
Creativity: sucka
Vocab: ehh
Enjoyment: both need to elevate, too basic
Opener: Sucka
Closer: Sucka

t-rex, you never get very personal with your verses dawg....you need to work on a more complex rhyme scheme........sucka, you have potential your just misguided that's all............
Personals: Sucka

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aieght... thats 3-0
aint that a KO yet? lol
Lets get some more VOTES!
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