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Old 12-24-04, 11:21 AM   #1
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Bitch, Fuck That.....(hot!!!!!!)

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beat by Ral4Ever1985
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Old 12-24-04, 11:26 AM   #2
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i dropped feed back in this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167531
and in class is in session
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Old 12-24-04, 12:17 PM   #3
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beat is good

nice emotion/delivery in this track


i personally love ya voice


pretty slick lyrics


vocals could be a touch louder...but this was good mayne



7/10



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Old 12-24-04, 04:49 PM   #4
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pretty good
ok lyrics some were really good some were blah but overall good
beat i liked it
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Old 12-24-04, 05:00 PM   #5
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Yeah.....I'm feeling this one Eck to tha Hoe

Beat was sick. Flow sounded rushed at a spot or two, but overall it was tight. Emotion and delivery were on point. Flow suffered a little toward the end of the second verse. A few of your dubs were off which made it sound like your flow was off. Supervillain and will a peer got a shout out but I didn't.......I'm hurt...lol.

Nice track man....
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Old 12-24-04, 05:41 PM   #6
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^^^^u did get a shot out Big Bad Mr. E^^^^^^^lol thanks for the feed
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Old 12-26-04, 03:18 AM   #7
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more feed back plz
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Old 12-29-04, 02:15 AM   #8
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wheres the constructve critizism
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Old 12-29-04, 02:34 AM   #9
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nice beat..............nice beat...... i was feeling how this didnt have a chorus but it just had an instramental type of chorus......

you need to spit a lil more clearer in some spots....maybe its your mic....but nice emotion nice emotion.....<<<you got me repeatign my self...lol.......also worlk on your breathing...mesage was hard a fuck....


did not here my name...i heard SV...will a peer and i think enygma but not the D>J EM SCE.........

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Old 12-31-04, 09:12 AM   #10
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listenin now--yeaaaaaaa dat beat..............dis is dope
but u know what i dnt like is tha lil bits where its jus the snare drum or wateva, i dunno its jus a bit annoyin afta the 1st time lol
but ur flow is tight

ur flow and ur voice snded like pac for that bar where u sumin like:
"anxiety u lil bitch wit tha MAB, tha way u stressed tha MAB syllable was PAcesque man snded dope

i was likin the bar in the begginning aswell:
"yo its tha Eazy C K O comin wit the left blow, goin on the next plateau, here i go"

Get rid of lil snare drum acapella bits in middle of ur flow and this is dope
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Old 01-04-05, 06:22 AM   #11
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more feed back plz......
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Old 01-04-05, 12:37 PM   #12
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a yo this was a hott track lyrics were good, quality was aight, only thing was that sometimes you fell off track, but bitch fuck that no one will notice,it had me noddin my head for a little bit 8.5/10
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