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Old 10-30-06, 12:38 PM   #1
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Celebrity Picture Battle - Cocaine (Peyton Manning) vs Roger Glocks (Tom Brady)

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This is a celebrity picture battle. The competitors must diss their opponent, as if they were the celebrities.

Cocaine as Peyton Manning



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Old 10-30-06, 06:26 PM   #2
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Old 10-30-06, 06:58 PM   #3
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werddd 16 should be iight...
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Old 10-30-06, 08:34 PM   #4
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Call me number 18 why cause i pack two nines..
&& You Can
Take the face paint off, your still leaving with black eyes
Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
Your record.. it dont mean shit to me...
cuzzzz..
after branch left.. u can no longer go out on a limb for victories
You shouldnt even be playing.. Son i'll break your mouth..
Cause when my knife sliced you
................You Bledsoe much they had to take him out...
Nobody's feeling you under center except a few sluts..
& your line noticed u feeling under center a little too much
Playing for New England.. son, its not much of a task..
Cause now we know you wont throw NE touchdown pass
Tom your wack.. your skills dont see me..
Scramble to make a play.. but this is still over easy..
Whether its Glocks or Brady.. Against Peyton or Coke..
You'll See A Zero.. in either points or votes...
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Old 11-02-06, 12:30 AM   #5
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look at this redneck! u live in a double wide and theres no doubting
cuz his trailor attracts more gay dudes then Brokeback Mountain
you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
^ wat am I saying? what girl have u ever been with? your the fakest
I banged Tara Reid then threw her away like Manning against the Patriots
listen, not to call attention to your forehead but you'll juss slip n fall
but u got a good head on you. especially to headbutt brick walls
mouth wide open. get ready to suck dick. your feeling tense n shits vibrant
your prob on Edge now ...ohh wait...he left! now what dick are you riding?
Have all that offensive talent around you but still your so far away
cuz the ring scares him more then that movie that kills u in 7 days
drunk driving, killing a man, raping a girl and selling that hard white crack
^but theres one Law you cant break!
.... his name is TY and he plays corner back



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From Sony to Sprint, ESPN to DirecTV, Marsh to Bill Estes Automotive Group, companies across the country have flocked to Manning


^take the commercial success, get the gold and make that dough
but im glad u have a Direct TV...
..you can have more fun watching me win the super bowl

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Old 11-02-06, 02:47 PM   #6
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nice drop lets get some votessss
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Old 11-02-06, 04:10 PM   #7
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Cocaine:
Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
Your record.. it dont mean shit to me...
cuzzzz..
after branch left.. u can no longer go out on a limb for victories
You shouldnt even be playing.. Son i'll break your mouth..
Cause when my knife sliced you
................You Bledsoe much they had to take him out...

Glocks:
you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
mouth wide open. get ready to suck dick. your feeling tense n shits vibrant
your prob on Edge now ...ohh wait...he left! now what dick are you riding?

^take the commercial success, get the gold and make that dough
but im glad u have a Direct TV...
..you can have more fun watching me win the super bowl

Overall this was a little dissapointing... I expected more from Glocks but Overall i felt that Cocaine definately hit harder with the football punches with the freeny/bledsoe music lines we're nice since this was based on football really

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Old 11-02-06, 05:19 PM   #8
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Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
Your record.. it dont mean shit to me...
cuzzzz..
after branch left.. u can no longer go out on a limb for victories
Nobody's feeling you under center except a few sluts..
& your line noticed u feeling under center a little too much

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you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
mouth wide open. get ready to suck dick. your feeling tense n shits vibrant
your prob on Edge now ...ohh wait...he left! now what dick are you riding?
^take the commercial success, get the gold and make that dough
but im glad u have a Direct TV...
..you can have more fun watching me win the super bowl

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Old 11-02-06, 10:20 PM   #9
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good looks Ace......
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Old 11-03-06, 02:51 AM   #10
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Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
You shouldnt even be playing.. Son i'll break your mouth..
Cause when my knife sliced you
................You Bledsoe much they had to take him out...
Playing for New England.. son, its not much of a task..
Cause now we know you wont throw NE touchdown pass

^ not all your punches related to peyton manning.. but i quoted two that didn't so they were pretty good. i especially liked the bledsoe wordplay.. pretty fresh. your wording almost killed the NE line for me, and i think you could've used the branch shit a lot better but i liked your verse.

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look at this redneck! u live in a double wide and theres no doubting
cuz his trailor attracts more gay dudes then Brokeback Mountain
you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
Have all that offensive talent around you but still your so far away
cuz the ring scares him more then that movie that kills u in 7 days

^ i think you focussed too much on him not winning superbowls. the edge line could've been cool.. but i wasn't feeling the gay take you had on it. the Ty Law line would've worked a lot better for me if he had broke any of those laws.. seemed like you were reaching a bit.


i got y'all tied on qoutables.. but i'ma have to edge this to cocaine. bit of an upset i guess.. but i was feelin his quotables a bit more, and his verse as a hole outside of what i quoted.

v/ Cocaine. entertaining read dudes.. hit up my battle with wyte.
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Old 11-03-06, 04:19 PM   #11
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Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
Your record.. it dont mean shit to me...
cuzzzz..
after branch left.. u can no longer go out on a limb for victories
Nobody's feeling you under center except a few sluts..
& your line noticed u feeling under center a little too much

vs.

you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
mouth wide open. get ready to suck dick. your feeling tense n shits vibrant
your prob on Edge now ...ohh wait...he left! now what dick are you riding?
Have all that offensive talent around you but still your so far away
cuz the ring scares him more then that movie that kills u in 7 days

Cool battle fellas, one of the best battles I've read this week. Cocaine came wayyy better than I expected, good shit duke. Glocks came pretty decent too tho. Thing is, Cocaine, u really fell off hard at the end. Ur last 6 lines were all really weak that really cost u. Glocks closer was eh, but he really never slowed down, verse was much more consistent than Cocaine. Choke and ring lines I thought were the best of the battle, and combined with consistency, I think Glocks got this. Good effort tho Cocaine

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Old 11-04-06, 03:16 PM   #12
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Cocaine
Playoff's yah bitch.. you'll see me in that place...
But your line cant stand to mine..
..............so you can catch a freeney to the face...
Nobody's feeling you under center except a few sluts..
& your line noticed u feeling under center a little too much

Roger
you better watch ya girl tho.. she wants it in the throat
shes treating my dick like peyton manning in january..watch her choke
Have all that offensive talent around you but still your so far away
cuz the ring scares him more then that movie that kills u in 7 days

Overall this was and average battle I think that on the serious note that Coke actually came with the better lines so im give my vote to coke

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Old 11-05-06, 09:46 AM   #13
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Cocaine wins 3-2.

Cocaine wins.
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