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Old 04-14-05, 02:54 PM   #1
diman
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Acuity vs diman

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Poetry Battle:

T = Christianity
20-30 Lines.
2 Day Check.
1 Hour Drop.

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Old 04-14-05, 07:06 PM   #2
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diman has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-05 07:06 PM.
 
Old 04-14-05, 07:30 PM   #3
diman
you dont know me
 
IP: 5867 FD83

Christianity


the mold,
my soul..............martyr of patience & the voice of faith
a home to the savior, given peace & the breathe of life
heir to heaven...carried the smile that rejoiced my face
which trusted lust & hate...but God would bless dispite

and listen,
driven to spread the gospel........i did away with mortal sin
then burried my eyes deep into the pages of the Holy book
the floors climbed to my face...when i prayed mourn for Him
& vowed a list of persistance......after the step i boldly took

the choir,
set fire to satan's motives............praise & honor both spoken
crowned the helmet of salvation...........i stood heavy in battle
held ties with the Spirit............such bonds never to be broken
burdened to please the Almight, & give back the garden apple

the contradiction,
the Bible's fiction state moved me...............He reigns omnicience
thoughts of doubt...........if He knows my future He ends free will
slapped religious belief in the face & laughed at God's sufficeince
i myself broke the bond of righteousness...............let sin rebuild

and further,
thus murdered my trust of sanctification..........& trust in Jesus' birth
regretting prayers..............rose over Mary & all thats blessed divine
placed my bible in the offering basket.......now walked free of church
forgot the miracles & redemptions....like Tim LaHaye, was left behind
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