Somethin' I wrote while I was bored, waitin' to get on the net........holla


I was sent to destroy and Shatter-Tendons-Quick //
So I’ll be happy to oblige and Batter-Pretenders-Lickity-Split //

I’m comin’ OFF THE TOP, you still can’t Grapple-The-Ropes //
Sorry to tell it to ya straight and Smash-Ya-High-Hopes //

I black out the retina and cause Blind-sight-lacerations //
With that in mind, you won’t be able to Grind & Fight-whack-reputations //

I’m the Queen bow down steady, cuz I Spit-Holier-Than-Thou //
I take all the beef, so observe as I Rip & Smolder-Unwanted-Cows //

The race is neck and neck, so I’m a Tighten-The-Noose //
Illuminate ya ass fo’ fun, juss to Enlighten-The-Mood//

I’m the truth in tha game, no need to Pick-And-Choose //
I do it big like surgeons and Snip-Weak-Crews //

After I spit my best, you cats Tend-To-Get-Wrecked //
So I’ll gladly manhandle you and watch you Bend-And-Dissect //

not bad not bad at all check out my boot camp shit aight holla!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was fucking terrible.

The content was bad, really bad. None of your lines made me think, at all, that`s how simple they were.

The flow was very choppy, also. You went from like, thirty syllable lines, to ten syllables.

This was pretty bad. Go to the Help Forum.

hey t lite....when did you come here?

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nice.
u did alright.
try a little harder next time.

I been hea ove a year paper...

o iight..dont thay all really suck thoguh? oi havent found one of them wit much talent......sad really

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all I can say about this is
that it was decent
not wack
but not the greatest
keep elevating
peace

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R.I.P. Bodie

NO Beef T-lite but i read through some ppl's rhymes on here but the verses u spit on FBA won't cut it as :tite: on the board...these cats got alot of keystyle skill

BUT anyway this wasn't horrible but u could do better ma *dueces*

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

Um won't cut it lmao........I'm in Blueprint, and currently murkin' cats..........sorry

but it'll be aight.........