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Old 08-20-09, 04:18 PM   #1
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new track "hold u down" 'Boss"new video

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i was the second verse in "hold u down" and 2 verse in "boss"
im nellz ..tell me what u think

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Old 08-20-09, 04:30 PM   #2
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diggin ya flow, pretty good, quality a little lame. the adlibs is pretty lame, content decent. not bad, check my tracks
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Old 08-23-09, 07:25 PM   #3
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Old 08-26-09, 08:19 AM   #4
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lyrics were alright,but def better then your last shit.the video was cool to.
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Old 08-27-09, 04:18 AM   #5
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good lookin on the feedback ..i appreciate it..i feel u ..but none of these trax i put my all into..im workin on a demo with producer ..should be done soon..i knew u wasnt hatin..the funny thing about it is even my wack trax are better then half the dude thats signed
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Old 08-30-09, 09:39 PM   #6
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Old 09-10-09, 05:26 PM   #7
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Old 09-10-09, 07:10 PM   #8
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cool shit man, but you should have let your verse rock a few more bars instead of putting that drake clip in..you and homie on the first verse did ok job, both flows were choped not that bad though, but other then that decent shit man.

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Old 09-12-09, 01:58 AM   #10
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thanx for showi love can i get more feedback
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good lookin on the feedback ..i appreciate it..i feel u ..but none of these trax i put my all into..im workin on a demo with producer ..should be done soon..i knew u wasnt hatin..the funny thing about it is even my wack trax are better then half the dude thats signed

bull shit card is pulled. i dont know half the people signed but you aren't on a level worth gettin money thrown at you to make music. i know this for the fact that you aren't puttin your all into all of your trax and makin up excuses like that. can't get far makin excuses, come hard all the time, and expecially don't waste time gettin feed on songs you don't even think are that good
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