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Performance - yes sir
IP: F372 5FD0
Poker these niggas got em Folding With Ya
I got all these Kats In My Hand like Holding Wiskers Jea Dropping Bars like Stolen Snickers Do a Drive By On ya Frame like im Rolling Pictures Any nigga,i'll Rip..got mad for the Fourth time wanna see how the Fifth Do Nothing to be fucked with like the game i Twist Dudes I wrote it,no nigga dumb enuff to Appoarch This Cause i Hit em hard and smoke'd up like Roaches Got em drowning in my Bars like being lost in the Ocean I got skills in definintion fuck Mistakes im rappin on Purpose Never scared to battle anyone wanna i'll show you what hurt is Its like Peeling off your Skin to the meat and im jus Scratching the Surface Emcee's is confused,it must be off the head to be a key not a Written One I would of thought that rappers Sprint for a leavin cause they Missions Run My name Jea-Guttah for a reason cuz rhymes is back to back til the Clip is Done Listen son, i aim to please no hard currents these lames a breeze Readin my rhymes is like eating a slurpee fast got ya brain on freeze Skills are endless they'll neva go away jus incase lemme tap wood Fuck knockin on trees i dont need shit cause yea im that good - Hottest Thing Out - Yes Sir.. |
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Actually, This Wasn't Half Bad. . Some Nice Lines. . Albeit Played Ones. . Flow Suffered From The Stretched Bars In The Middle. . Work On Evening Things Out Or Inserting Periods Like I Do For Pauses So The Flow Is Still Seen And Not Lost. . Decent Vocab. . Some Good Multi's. . Maybe More Multi's Next Piece To Help On Flow. . Structure Was Fucked Because Of The Middle Of This Piece. . Topic Of Self Proclaimation/Bragging Is Played, But This Is Your First Drop And You Were Making A Statement. . And Shit Was Decent. . Keep Droppin Man, Only Room For Improvement. Pz.
Poker these niggas got em Folding With Ya I got all these Kats In My Hand like Holding Wiskers Jea Dropping Bars like Stolen Snickers Do a Drive By On ya Frame like im Rolling Pictures ^ ^ Pretty Good Way To Open Up, My Fave Lines Of This Drop. . Even Tho All Lines Are Played, Shit Flowed Good, Shoulda Kept This Tempo The Whole Time. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111016 ^ ^ Hit It Up, Appreciate It.
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Thanks for the information - i honestly didn't have my head all the way into !
but check out my next post - shit gonna be HOTT lol i am 50 times better than what i spitted up there |
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